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There was a kiss that was so diveine,
It truly made a mark in my time
i saw her for the first time that day,
and every thing went very well in a way
we ate we drank we sat and we huged
i was no happier than at that moment it felt like i was druged
my heart was afire with a undieing love
and i was flying higher than a turtle dove
Its that first kiss that i will always remeber
even while traveling to far off regions
even know i dream of this kiss
and she is truly amazing the girl i miss
every day i realize that one of the more happy days
was when she was in my arms
im know traveling the world abroad
and to this girl i will applaude
she has stolen something no one ever has
she has taken my heart
ok i know i suck at poetry, in all forms, so sue me im a marine i do things like kill shit and get killed u know that, but anyway this is for a very special person, she knows who she is, this is a continuation kinda of something from summer. i hope you enjoy hun
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irishmidget Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2007
Awww! is this about that one girl you told me about? this is so cute! i had no idea you wrote poems!
BlackMageDarkness Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2007
shhhhh dont tell anyone and ya i wrote one to her in the summer to, my best one then i think, and ya it is about her but yaa keep this on the dl please
irishmidget Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2007
i will i promice! i wont tell a soul.

DemonHorse70 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2007
*giggles softly* Well, considering the "knows" are supposed to be "now"... It's really good and cute.
Arigato Gozaimus... Aishite iru
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