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Blacklemon67

Bork Bork I'm A Shork
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Artist // Hobbyist // Digital Art
  • Canada
  • Deviant for 14 years
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Live long and augment

Favourite Movies
Persepolis, Summer Wars, Brazil, Brick, Mishima, Sunshine, Akira
Favourite TV Shows
The Mighty Boosh, Luxury Comedy, Seinfeld, MST3k, Breaking Bad, Twin Peaks, Adventure Time, Paranoia Agent
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Anamanaguchi, Animal Collective, The Books, Bloc Party, Das Racist, Downstate, WAVVES, Philip Glass, Susumu Hirasawa
Favourite Books
Spin, Permutation City, Accelerando, Snow Crash, Neuromancer, On Intelligence, House of Leaves
Favourite Writers
William Gibson, Neil Stephenson, Charles Stross, Greg Egan
Favourite Games
Minecraft, Wireworld, Tetris, Wikipedia Pinball, Perl Golf
Favourite Gaming Platform
PS2 or PS3
Tools of the Trade
Photoshop/GIMP, Liquid Ink Pen, Thick Paper, Wings3d, Blender, Tablet
Other Interests
Programming, Computer Science

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Comments

:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This is a very well drawn piece I must say. The colouring works very well together. At first glance, the shading looked perfect, but after looking it over a couple of times, I noticed that you failed to add some shadows around the face area. Also the bottom right mask part looks like thick paper curving slightly inward. You should work on shading that part. Another mis-shading I noted is the mask doesn't look like its making too much of a shadow on the bottom part of the face, like how I would expect the lighting direction to cause.

I really did like the combination of colors, as in the bright red in the foreground and dark brown in the background. I think you had a good idea going into this so that's the reason I gave you a 5 for vision. But there are an extremely large amount of partially covered armored faces on deviant art.

I truly love how the mask flows like, well, lava + water. The spikes near the top of the face look really cool. This motion gave your painting an extra umph in impact. This is going down in my favorites!
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Superb job! The entire picture really conveys the feeling of that tired military corps and their seemingly fruitless efforts to bring down a mythical being that just so happens to be fused with a butload of guns. WOW! That's a mouthful!

Plot aside, your painting skills are great. The reflection of light on the helmet in the bottom left looks far from legit (in the good direction <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/r/r…" width="15" height="15" alt="=P" title="=P (Razz)" />)

Anyhow, now for the constructive critique: I swear I've seen something like this before, just a dragon instead of a crazy dinosaur thing.

The awkward pose of the beast sort of messes up the flow, in my opinion and the entire upper third of the frame is blank, and crowded in the other 2 thirds. For this, your impact suffers.
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