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Servalia Lineart Fire Mage OC by BlackHawk45LC Servalia Lineart Fire Mage OC by BlackHawk45LC
I hope to get an opportunity to paint this soon. 
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To start with this is fantastic line work, projecting layers and depth extremely well without relying on shading. The only part I would say that breaks the illusion of depth is the tip of the staff, but if the correct shading was added that would not be a thing.

The clothing has been done extremely, well, original thought and design that works beautifully. The only criticism that I would have is the extension of the hip section, assuming that this is a human, where the pants start, in relation to the hips would be bellow where the crotch is. But possibly not, just from how I am interpreting the picture.

That is all of the criticism that I can find with this piece, so now I will go on to my favorite part. The details that you have put in to this piece are magnificent, that character isn't over cluttered or too clean and simplified, it has a beautiful balance showing a well seasoned character. Realistic designing of the character means she is not top heavy and over sexualised, the expression sits perfectly, accentuating a determined and very dangerous character. I really like this piece and would love to see it when/if it is colourized and put to a background.

Fantastic Draw.
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vangogh2005 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I absolutely love how strong and fierce she looks. Very good job. Did you design first in pencil in paper?
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BlackHawk45LC Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you so much! This actually started on cintiq and finished there.
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iriuu Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2017
looks nice, pehaps you could put her a tatto in her arm, or face, perhaps full body, just trying to give you ideas XD
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BlackHawk45LC Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
She has light colored marks and symbols over much of her body. They disappear as she casts spells. Thanks for the comment!
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iriuu Featured By Owner Edited Dec 17, 2017
oh really? I would like to see how that looks, now I'm really looking foward to the final product
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BlackHawk45LC Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome thanks for your interest in Servalia. Here is an older painting of the character: blackhawk45lc.deviantart.com/a…
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