Page 1 (7 Panels)
Panel 1 Establishing shot of a fair. Day time. A small
group of people are gathered outside the bumper cars.
Panel 2 BROOKS and CARTER are getting into their separate
Brooks is short with brown hair and brown eyes. He wears a white shirt with a vest over it and his signature trilby.
Carter is a bit lanky with dark shaggy hair and wearing a black jacket.
I wonder why the girls didn't want
to join us.
Panel 3 CAM and MELLA watch them, leaning against a
railing. Cam is holding a large, colorful teddy bear.
NOTE: ZERO and KICKER are standing next to them.
Cam and Mella are sisters. Cam is tall and slender with brown hair and brown eyes. Mella a bit shorter than her sister. She’s heaver and curvy. She has dark curly hair and brown eyes. Both sisters are wearing dark colored clothing.
You think we should have warned
Ah let them have their fun.
Panel 4 AUDREY and TROJAN get into their cars.
Audrey has reddish brown hair and dark colored eyes. She’s wearing a black shirt a tan colored slacks.
Trojan is dark brown hair and brown eyes. He's a bit skrawny.
I warn you, I kinda of good at
Bring it on.
Panel 5 ZERO and KICKER watch from outside the railing.
Zero is munching on some cotton candy.
Zero is short with an athletic build. She has blonde hair with the ends dyed pink and blue eyes.
Kicker is tall and a bit muscular. Has short dark brown hair.
Troy knows she used to be a stunt
Let them enjoy their day off.
Panel 6 Carter and Brooks are now inside their cars.
Alright Brooks, get ready to be...
Panel 7 AUDREY barrels right into Carter, taking him by
complete surprise. SFX: BAM!
Page 2 (7 Panels)
Panel 1 Brooks sits back in his car in complete shock.
Panel 2 Audrey bashes into Brooks.
Panel 3 Brooks adjusts his hat.
Where'd she come from..?
Panel 4 He's hit by Audrey again...
Panel 5 ...and again...
Panel 6 ...and again.
Panel 7 Audrey taunts Brooks from her car. Brooks is
slumped forward with hands on his wheel and the brim of
his hat covering his eyes.
Sorry honey, am I too fast for you?
Page 3 (7 Panels)
Panel 1 Close up. Brooks looks up with his sly maniac
Panel 2 Cam and Mella become worried. They know what's
coming next. Zero and Kicker stare at them in curiosity.
He's got that look in his eye!
Panel 3 Audrey looks around for Trojan.
Now where's Trojan...
Panel 4 Brooks barrels right into her.
Panel 5 He hits her again.
Panel 6 Brooks mocks her from his car.
Sorry sweetheart, am I too fast for
Panel 7 Zero and Kicker are concerned. Cam and Mella stare
Did he just called her sweetheart?
He's so dead.
Page 4 (6 Panels)
Panel 1 Audrey and Brooks circle each other.
</b>Panel 2</b> They glare at one another.
Panel 3 Carter and Trojan are parked next to each other.
This isn't going to end well.
Panel 4 Brooks and Audrey charge straight for each other.
Panel 5 SFX: BAM!
Panel 6 Audrey and Brooks are sitting on a bench outside
of the fairgrounds. They both very annoyed. SCOPE and MARS
have come to picked them up.
Scope has brown hair that’s braided. Her eyes are grey.
Mars is Asian American with brown hair and dark colored eyes.
So how exactly did you guys get
banned from the fair?
This is something I wrote for RandomTownComics .
It was suppose to be two pages but I went over so I tried to stay under three, only that didn't seem to happen either. I guess I need to practice writing more scripts.
Our homework was to write two characters from different universes and have them meet. So I chose my characters Brooks from a detective story and Audrey from a GI Joe parody story.
Fun to read i could just imagine what was going on. I want to go on bumper cars now LOL. All i would say now is research comic book writing, because when you are to write a story that is gonna be drawn, as an artist, 7 panels on every page is doesn't give me enough space on the page to add too much detail and plus the word balloons that gotta be added, but i mean yeah other than that yeah and anyways im sure you where doing this from a story stand point fitting as much as you could into as little pages as possible.