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The world we wanted

The sound of clashing blades
Is shattering the night
The fight outside the gates
Is luring the knight

He opens the door
And gets stabbed by a shape
Blood drops on the floor
And something's hitting his nape

The attackers are taking
Everything worthwile
And then they are making
His home to a pile

Now that place is haunted
A new time begun
Is this what we wanted
The world to become?
I didn't know in wich category it fits best so i choose General Poetry.

If you have any suggestions, please tell me. :)

Feedback would be great.
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TheMorris Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2009
Ich mag es !__!
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Black-Pixel Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Das freut mich. :)
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