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I always imagined Applejack's wedding dress to not be one that was newly made, but everything she wore to be family hand me downs. It was a simple gown, a little ragged here and there and certainly far from in style, but a precious heirloom that has been worn by ponies at their weddings for generations.
Tell the story in the comments what you think would be happening in the picture! I would love to hear it
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Tell the story in the comments what you think would be happening in the picture! I would love to hear it
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Overall
Vision Originality Technique
ImpactThis drawing is beautiful. The pencil lines have a sketchy feel, but function as inking and shading.
I like bored teenage Apple Bloom with her hammer cutie mark.
The only thing that doesn't work for me is the background; it's quite distracting, and turns her dress into camouflage. I'd like to see this against a vector of the inside of Sweet Apple Acres' farmhouse, from the Cutie Pox or Family Appreciation Day.
For touch-up, I'd like to see Applejack's blush turned from pencil to color, and bits of pencil sketchiness removed from the front of the dress, Apple Bloom's sleeve and face, and the train of the dress. I also find Apple Bloom's cutie mark to be a bit confusing with two apples, one further than the other. If one had to go, I'd remove the one under the hammer (further to the rear).