Vision - I think that this is a great overall shot. It has drama, flair, a "zing" factor and that special something that makes you look again.
Originality - I had to check a few times and read the description carefully to see that there in indeed TWO women, not a photoshopped image - great work with that, it gives the viewer something to think on.
Technique - I love the play of red lipstick and rouge on ladies in red, in a red room with wooden (red) accents. The lighting is also fabulously done to get all of the folds and curves, one could almost believe that it had been painted in minute detail due to the amazing play of shadows and light.
Impact - 100%! This image just jumps out at me, my only comment would be that it should be framed, even if it is digital and on DA, it still deserves to be framed, just to let your viewer know that it is "finished"
Great work, you are a fantastic artist.