Shop Forum More Submit  Join Login
~Luo Tianyi~ by beetale ~Luo Tianyi~ by beetale
Time: 2 hrs 
Program: Clip Studio Paint PRO 
~Critique Accepted~
Add a Comment:
 
:iconmiribork:
miribork Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
May i give some criticism/critiques ;0
Reply
:iconbeetale:
beetale Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sure but keep it friendly 
Reply
:iconmiribork:
miribork Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wouldn't try to hurt you! :"0
Just to make it easier, I'll do this in a numbered list.
--
1. The head seems too big for the body but if it's a style choice it's ok. However, the face doesn't seem to fit the face.

2. The pose doesn't really seem to fit the bg but that just be me :")

3. One thigh is larger/wider than the other

4. I feel as the style is too simple for the extra hair details, it just doesn't fit yknow?
Reply
:iconbeetale:
beetale Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, I'll keep it in mind later 
Reply
:iconmiribork:
miribork Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're welcome ;0
Reply
:iconxstrangedoodx:
xStrangeDoodx Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2018  Student General Artist
May i critique?
Reply
:iconbeetale:
beetale Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
of course, but please be nice when critiqing 
Reply
:iconxstrangedoodx:
xStrangeDoodx Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2018  Student General Artist
Don't Worry Jodie uwu
The head it's a bit big comparing the rest of the body,the anatomy is actually pretty good! (good job nwn) but one leg seems a bit more fat then the other one,like is technically in perspetive...make it a bit more fatty than the other one,the hands are not weird like other drawings with hands i saw before(even my drawings haves a lot of weird hands xD), i love the expression on the face but one eyebrow it's too high,try it to make it a bit more down...a bit more close to the eye(like the other eyebrow),the effects are pretty nice to me but the light on the hair is a bit too white,you put opacity more lower the next time.The Backgroung is simple and nice to the view,is not that overloaded.

In stars (for me)
Vision 
Originality 

Technique 

Impact 
(I tried to make it like dA critiques...meh :v)

It's a really cute
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×



Details

Submitted on
January 8
Image Size
891 KB
Resolution
2894×2039
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
81 (1 today)
Favourites
28 (who?)
Comments
8
×