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Burn me up inside your fire
I'm the darkness you're the flame
If we fall inside each other
I will be the one to blame

Cast your spell of warmth upon me
I'll give hatred in return
If you choose to find your freedom
I will be the one to burn
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nicubunu Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2010   General Artist
I think the poem is a bit short, I don't understand why you, the darkness, are the one to blame... it should not be shared equally?

As I see, you start it on a pessimistic note: you expect to be the one burned in the end.

Stop hating, hate goes nowhere. But I fully understand your need of warmth. Who does not need it?
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beculetzi Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
it is kind of a circle... the fire always ends the darkness, while darkness comes when fire ends
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