Metamorphosis: The Conclusion

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Hello everyone!

Thank you all for your fantastic participation in this workshop! As you know, this was a first workshop of a resurrected group and the level of response is a great encouragement that bringing it back was the right decision. It's good to see the progression of the workshop pattern and this will help for future workshops. As we develop the revived group, we will be revisiting how this group runs, so expect progressional updates over the next few months until we are settled into a well-oiled workshopping machine!


The Workshop of Change



What we will do in these conclusion workshops is review the subject and wrap up how it went. This is a great opportunity for you to reflect on how you did, but also feed back on the prompt and critique.

I felt like change was an apt choice to relaunch this workshop. The focus was really not just about what the change was, but ensuring that the effects are carried on throughout the piece. I have noticed some bad writing habits where writers forget that the plot can affect characters in different ways, or sometimes not affect people at all because they focus too much on one character or one environment. Good writing creates a more dimensional reality and so this exercise was just one way to explore this.

I personally was really impressed with the range of pieces that came out of this workshop. The fact people had even attempted poetry on something I feared was a prosaic orientated prompt proved me wrong! Some people found the task quite challenging, and I think perhaps stipulating that you couldn't explicitly say what the change was became much harder than it seemed at the start. However, there were some pieces that really grasped it such as PaperDart 's Callow's Class and Rieal-Dragonsbane 's Chilli Squid, both pieces I'd recommend worth a read! 

Well done to everyone who did have a go though, it's always a good challenge as a writer to try new things, especially for some who I think felt out of their comfort zone- these things may be bumpy now, but do take the critique on board and work on rewriting them to something else.

Please note: The workshop folder will now be closed and submissions will no longer be accepted. If you wrote for this and did not submit in time, please note Writers-Workshop with a link to your piece and we will add it.


Questions for Members



Whether you wrote a piece or not, it would be interesting to hear some feedback from others about the workshop!

1. Did you participate in this workshop as a writer/critique/neither/both?
2. If you did not participate, why not? If you did, what encouraged you to participate?
3. As a writer, how did you approach writing for this workshop? Was it different to your usual writing techniques?
4. If you received critique, what feedback really stood out for you and will help you with future writing?
5. Do you plan to re-write/ continue this piece beyond the workshop constraints?
6. If you gave critique, do you have any general observations about the pieces that seemed to reoccur?
7. Whose workshop pieces stood out to you and why?
8. If you did this workshop again/participated, how would you do things differently?
9. Did the reading material help you with the workshop at all?
10. Is there any additional feedback or comments you would like to add in regard to this workshop?


Next Workshop



The June workshop shall begin over the weekend. There is some recommended reading again, which will probably really give away where we are going with the next workshop, but be intrigued, its a good one!  You can read just one, or all four if you like and if you notice where we're going, read some more:

HIMYM Friends  Blackadder Miranda 


That's all till next workshop! Thank you all!

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1. Did you participate in this workshop as a writer/critique/neither/both?
Both, although I feel my performance in the critique part of the workshop was a little lackluster. I'd originally planned to leave at least a little something on every piece, but only got around to giving some criticism on three or so. Exams kind of got in the way there.... >_>
2. If you did not participate, why not? If you did, what encouraged you to participate?
I've been trying to get a bit more active within the DA writing community, and to kick myself in the seat of the pants and write some more in general, and felt like a workshop would very much meet both criteria :) And it worked! :D
3. As a writer, how did you approach writing for this workshop? Was it different to your usual writing techniques?
It had been a while since I last worked on a short story, so that was certainly an interesting feel again :) And I also haven't had a chance to write much post-apocalyptic prose as of late, and I always find those greatly amusing, so that was fun too :) Most importantly, I really got to work on my editing skills, as my first draft was over 1200 words long, and there wasn't that much I felt I could skip in regards to events happening; this caused me to trim the piece pretty harshly, which ended up taking almost all of the description with it, leaving the dialogue to carry almost all of the story. It worked pretty well, so I'm happy with that :)
4. If you received critique, what feedback really stood out for you and will help you with future writing?
I feel like Neurotype's little snippet on the pacing was really nice; it's something I still often fail to pay attention to, and on reading that it became clear to me that I should have been incorporating it in my writing more skillfully.
5. Do you plan to re-write/ continue this piece beyond the workshop constraints?
I'm sure as hell thinking about it :) I've wanted to send in a short story for a local writing competition, and feel I might certainly have a chance with this piece after I've given it another run-through.
6. If you gave critique, do you have any general observations about the pieces that seemed to reoccur?
As mentioned, I didn't give out quite as much critique as I'd hoped to. But from what I've read, I can't say that I do.
7. Whose workshop pieces stood out to you and why?
Again, didn't get around to reading all of them, but I very much enjoyed Raspil's piece. It just tickled me in the right places :D
8. If you did this workshop again/participated, how would you do things differently?
I'd make sure to clear some more time in my schedule for reading and critique-giving :( Once again, sorry guys! I'll make up for it on the next one, hopefully :)
9. Did the reading material help you with the workshop at all?
I don't feel it did in particular, although the piece is such a classic I feel that any writer worth their beans should have read this at least once.
10. Is there any additional feedback or comments you would like to add in regard to this workshop?
It was lovely, and for me personally it helped me to get something new on the table, which is something I've been struggling with lately. I enjoyed it very much, and I was pleasantly surprised at the amount of criticism people were leaving all around, so I'll make sure to be back for the next one! :D