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Draw My OC Contest Entry: Zoraya by Beadedwolf22 Draw My OC Contest Entry: Zoraya by Beadedwolf22
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I really love how you had her popping out of her vessel! I feel like its very creative especially with the added table top? or cloth? I feel like her pose is really cute too ^_^

As for things I would say could use work is possibly some heavier shading, perhaps looking at some more anatomical references, and perhaps adding some more perspective in?

Please keep in mind this is just how I like to draw, so feel free to carry on how you would like, and I hope this helps ^_^. For heavier shading I mean perhaps some more.... Dark and light contrast that plays around the character. Don't be afraid to play with different lighting colors too since those play a big part in it. For example, a lamp can put off a more yellowish light opposed to natural light that gives a more bluish hue of a highlight. Also, some more bold shading regarding darker tones would really help this piece pop too! Don't be afraid of darker shades! They're your friend especially in such a light piece like this ^_^ (Also, I'd say refer to some more shading examples of metals, but honestly those don't help me much either ^^: )

As for anatomy and all that stuff, I like the really nice pose; however, the front legs seem a little noodley to me and the back legs seem to be bent a little oddly. I feel like the back legs would be a little more slanted? toward the viewer since her, I'm going to sound like a kid but oh well, tummie is sort of facing us. (I could try to draw this out if you would like an example of what I mean).

Then last of all, I feel like her pose, although very nice, seems sort of flat? Don't be afraid to make some parts bigger to make it seem as if parts are closer to the viewer and that whole jumble of stuff ^^; Perhaps you could have made it where she's popping out of her lamp and in a way bouncing towards the viewer or something?

Anyways, hope this helped at least a little bit, and I certainly look forward to more pony pictures from you ^_^
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purplecruiser Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2018
Ohhh, pretty! I like how her tail basically turns to smoke pouring out of the lamp! This is really nice and pretty, and I love it!
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Beadedwolf22 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2018
Thank you very much ^^
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purplecruiser Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2018
Your welcome! Her floatyness and all else, it’s very nice! I’d give a proper review but. . . I can’t really do “proper” to save my life, sorry. . .
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Beadedwolf22 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2018
That's perfect hun, I can't do it either XD;
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purplecruiser Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2018
O-oh, well, alrighty then I suppose. does this lovely lass have a story, or what? 

All I can think off right off the top of my head is, “Is the lamp huge compared to the pony? Or is this little Genie really that little, and the lamp is normal-sized?” either way. . . The whole thing altogether is gorgeous.
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Beadedwolf22 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2018
I like to think when Geneighs come out of their lamps, they start off small before growing to full size. I believe they're normal pony size.

Again, thank you ^^
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purplecruiser Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2018
Ohh, that make sense actually. . . Though it’s funnier and cuter to think that they remain these tiny little itty bitty things, going about their great power in squeaky li’l voices <3 So cute~

Your welcome once again~
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Beadedwolf22 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2018
That would be adorable.
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