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I decided to do another project for myself, and bring back an old character I want to write a story about. This a story about a food critic blogger who is doing well in her new line of work, but dealing with new problem as she gains in her passion.
to see her gain some pounds all you have to do is donate, 1 dollar to make her gain a pound.
current weight: 125
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I made and update on this page cause a fellow artist gave me some tips on staging stuff, so I took his advise and fix them.
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to see her gain some pounds all you have to do is donate, 1 dollar to make her gain a pound.
current weight: 125
Click on the donate.
DONATE
I made and update on this page cause a fellow artist gave me some tips on staging stuff, so I took his advise and fix them.
Next
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactHello, I'd like to offer some staging advice. First, flip the action so she's walking to screen right. Second, have the caption box on the left, followed by the character. In general, we read left to right so this will give this panel a nicer readability. Third, having her walking out of the entryway will empathize the transitionary event this character is experiencing. You can empathize it further by having her in partial shadow so she's walking out of a dark place and into the sunlight. Finally, the hands on hips as she walks out feels slightly unnatural, arms more hanging with fists clenched and shoulders up would convey the same feeling.
Hope this helps,
Andrew