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OC tournament round 2: Minari VS Ekitai

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Update: the voting phase has started!
Check here for details: [VOTING] OC Tournament 2018 Round 2Voting Deadline December 2, 2018
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Round 2 Matchups!
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Contest entry for the second round of the narutofanclub OC tournament.
It features airbender01's oc Minari Uzumaki. There's a Shin Uchiha clone too.

Story:

Those whose eyes have power are dangerous.

The more uncommon this power is,the bigger the threat.

My village lived under the constant watch of those eyes but today is different.

However the power of the remaining ones can risk our future.


The Sharingan, the special eye from the Uchiha clan is almost extinct after their massacre, but somehow I heard some rumors about someone being seen nearby Konohagakure who isn’t one of the two remaining members of the clan, who also has this power.

Someone who hides with these eyes is probably a menace.

Those eyes must disappear.


It was really easy to enter the village. The Village hidden in the Leaf is a peaceful place, its citizens welcomed me with open arms and they trust that I am not their enemy. I deeply appreciate their trust, but if they have not done anything about these rumors, I will have to verify their authenticity, and if it is necessary, take actions about it. It will be a favour on my behalf, afterall, I am the Leaf ally.


I walked around Konoha’s borders to check everything. The climate here is quite pleasing, even when I don’t really mind the constant rain from my native land, to feel the sun’s warmth accompanied by the fresh breeze is a different and relaxing experience.

“This place is just so peaceful,” I thought while I kept moving around the sun, wishing to myself that these rumors are nothing and this will only be a day to enjoy quietly... until I felt someone was watching me.

I’m too familiar with that sensation to doubt it as product of my own imagination.

I raised my guard and checked my surroundings. Whoever is watching me is being cautious and won’t let anyone see them so easily unless they have to. So I decided to provoke them.

I made some hand seals to make them feel threatened and by throwing a smoke bomb to the ground, I hid my presence. The smoke quickly filled the forest I was walking by.

I hear footsteps. I follow the sound, and once I am close enough to the source of it, I confirm the rumors: I see the glow of the Sharingan through the smoke. I hurried to make my move by extending my arm to the place this person’s neck should be, and I grabbed it. I get surprised by the size of their neck, oddly small for an adult, but I am not allowed to think more beyond this point as I’m being watched with fear by these eyes, whose shape has expanded.

I have no clue of how it happened, but somehow I was dragged into another place. It only took a second to go from the forest to this strange, dark location, filled with stones of unnatural shapes that extended like columns all the way up, like holding a roof far away.

It was due to the sudden change of atmosphere to one that was smoke-free that I finally able to see, in detail, the face of the enemy I’m holding by the neck.

It was a kid.

A really pale boy. No eyebrows. Funny haircut. All in white. Is it normal for a kid to be this ugly? His red, dangerous eyes looked at me with fear and rage didn’t help on making me feel uneasy about this kid, at least, until I see he’s holding a metallic weapon and its edge is coming straight to my face.

I reacted to the sudden attack as I could, dodging it and scolding myself in my head as for daring to underestimate my little opponent. I have really enjoyed these times with no war, but there are two things I’ve learned from these dark times: One is that enemies can take any size or shape, and the second is that, if I have to, I am very capable of murdering kids like these!


I activated my plasma jutsu around my forearm and a bright light filled the room. This jutsu’s light can blind anyone easily at this distance and this effect only increases with the darkness of this place.

The kid closes his eyes, trying to avoid the light, making things easier for me to continue. It’s almost funny how a cheap trick like this can defeat one of the most powerful dojutsu.

I use my chance, and with my plasma blade I cut this kid’s blade in two, reducing the threat for me and leaving his sharingan as my only problem.

To avoid eye contact, I grab the boy once more, this time by his temples, covering his eyes and throwing him easily to the ground.

The boy keeps struggling, now completely disarmed. He tries to release himself from my grip by scratching my skin with his fingernails and biting my finger as he can. He’s desperate.

I felt sorry for him.

I know kids can be wonderful. But this one… shouldn’t even exist.

The least I can do for him now is give him a quick, painless death by destroying his brain with my jutsu. Then get rid of his eyes so they’re not a problem again.


But as my shiny blade went down to his head, I felt my face cut by a kunai of a strange shape. Blood pours as I look back.


- “Leave him alone!”


I expected this voice and kunai to come from an enemy. But my surprise was huge when I see a man of dark hair and white eyes, wearing a coat that read “Ninth Hokage” on his back, and not only that, he came falling in my direction, ready to throw a huge attack.


”Shit!” I muttered as I grabbed my prey from his temple and moved away from his attack trajectory. I deactivated my jutsu to not challenge the Hokage any longer, but I never let the boy go.


This attack left a massive crater on the ground. I’m so glad I reacted fast.This man got up immediately after and looked in my direction.

-What are you doing?


-”...He started it.”

I’m not good making up excuses.


A goosebump went through my body as this man activated his Byakugan once more. He was looking right into my eyes, but I knew he was watching every single movement of my body and chakra.

Someone with those eyes is a Kage, and has to protect his village in times of peace and war. Surely he knows about how threatening could be this eyes coming from the wrong side. Maybe I can explain my situation better this time.


-This kid has the Sharingan. From what I understand, he’s not one of the surviving Uchihas… therefore he must be a threat for your village and the world… that’s why I am going to kill him.

-I won’t let you.

His words are deeply confusing. I ask.


-What do will you get from letting him live?

-I get nothing, but he does. I’m not gonna let you do any harm.


This kid is dangerous. His eyes will only bring disaster… I wonder… why would anyone want to keep him safe?


-Why? What are you trying to do, Hokage?... What will you do with this kid?

-I will protect him. He can become part of our village and live as any other boy.

-He’s not like any other boy…

-Let us give him a chance. Let him go, please.


The Hokage keeps staring at me with his white eyes. Is it a good idea to continue with this?

I can’t fight him. I’m just a Jounin. I just stand no chance against a Kage.

I have no chance…


No.


I’ve had enough.


A true leader would ensure its village safety and wouldn’t associate with potential threats...


“Like Pein did back then”


His only memory makes me mad. So mad I activate my jutsu again.

-You’re wrong. You don’t know what you’re saying. You have no idea of the suffering people with eyes like yours can cause!

I point my shiny blade to the so magnificent Hokage.

-If you think what you’re doing is right.... Then you’ll have to take him from my dead hands.

He looks at me clearly upset.

-I thought someone like you would be reasonable… Alright. I will not kill you… but I will do what I think is right.


___
And then he kicked her ass.
The end

Hope it's good xD


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rin037's avatar
YO this looks sick af tho 

ur work always looks so alive and in motion i wish i had half your skill at this Snif..Is Beautiful..Onion