All previous chapters of Breakout have been altered in some way, whether it be exapnding on certain sequences, trimming down on others or just simply proofreading. Agents Davers and Resone have much fuller introductions in chapter two now, for example. Go and have a read!
Also, chapter eight is now up! Hurrah! Hopefully I won't get the urge to edit this one anytime soon.
Hi guys! Hope everyone is well.
Like the rest of you (I'm assuming) I suddenly have a lot of free time on my hands and not much to do. So I decided to try and get back into writing, despite having a busted wrist at the time of writing this.
The logical choice is to, of course, carry on Breakout. However looking back over it, I can't help but feel that my heart isn't really in the writing. I like the story but I don't know, something about it all just seems a bit off. On top of that, while rereading it I kept seeing a lot of errors and parts that could have been rewritten better. Proofreading is defintely not my strong point sadly.
So I'm n
Hello everone! Most have have probably already seen this but for those who haven't, the long-awaited second chapter of Mom's Hunger, written by myself and images by Big-ELSA (https://www.deviantart.com/big-elsa) is now up on Elsa's page!
Followging the end of Chapter 1, Ben's mother Kathleen is still ravenously hungry and huge as well. Only problem is, they've run out of food! Can Ben keep things under control as his Mom decides to go out for a bit to eat? Read on and see...
You can check out the series below or on Big-Elsa's DA page, =Big-ELSA (https://www.deviantart.com/big-elsa)as well as many other great images! All feedback is greatly appreciated.
And will there be a continuation? Well, I've finished wr