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Odin's Law, Chapter 5
Chapter 5 Once the four of us were sitting at a table at the local Steak N' Shake waiting for the (obnoxiously bored looking) waitress to get to our table, I took stock of Evan. Blonde hair, blue eyes, vaguely Eurasian looking, maybe a year's difference with me agewise, not overly muscular. He looked like the kind of guy any girl would fall for if she were looking for a handsome guy with a warm feel about him. But in spite of all that, I just couldn't put my finger on what he was. Whatever he was, he didn't seem threatening, but considering they hadn't told me about this, Lucas and Debi must not have known he wasn't human. How Lucas didn't
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Noticing, Epilogue
“Kristie Deckard!” the principal called into the microphone. Kristie, her purple lipstick smile almost as bright as the lights in the auditorium. It matched the dress she was wearing under her robe, as well as the tattoo she got during Spring Break when we went down to Cancun. She was proud of that tattoo, for whatever reason. I was kind of annoyed with mine, but hers did turn out much better than mine did. I stood there in line with everybody else graduating. Larry was beside me, picking his nose like a disgusting pig. He yawned after a second, then put on a smile for whoever's camera happened to be panning past him at that mome
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Noticing, Day 7
When I woke up, Grant was still asleep. My top was still somewhere I didn’t really know, and I was still wrapped up with his arms. It was exactly as I’d fallen asleep, as if nothing had happened between when Grant and I were cuddling in front of the TV and now, at… Six thirty in the morning. The couch was still kinda sticky, the house was still a trashy mess, and so far as I could tell, Larry was still asleep up in his bedroom. But I remembered everything. I slid out from under Grant’s arms and realized, much like when I got up in the middle of the night, that I desperately had to pee. I laughed inwardly at the stupi
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Noticing, Day 6 Part 3
Laurie stepped forward. "What the hell is going on?" Mrs. Morfran shook her head. "Now now, young man, that's too strong a tone." "So what? Answer the question," I said, my own tone firm but concerned. "You as well, young lady. That's no way to speak to the goddess that fixed your wayward souls." "What?!" Laurie almost shouted. Mrs. Morfran looked up from her papers. "You couldn't see it, not by yourselves. You were too stuck, too… Lost. This gift I've given you, this change, is what you so desperately needed. If you hadn’t, things might have been very different indeed.” “What are you talking about?” I aske
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Noticing, Day 6 Part 2
The game ran over by about twenty minutes, but once all was said and done, our team beat the other guys 23 to 3. It was such a complete change from last week that I almost wondered if the guys had been replaced by a different team while we weren’t looking. You’d never think our team would be able to do that with a slight buzz. After we changed out of our uniforms, we waited for the guys in the hallway outside the locker room. I realized then that all of us were dating football players. I’d never noticed that before, but we were. It was weird, in a way, but cheerleaders dating jocks was kind of a stereotype. Not that I saw t
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Noticing, Day 6 Part 1
Today was the day. Today was The Day. The Day when Larry and I passed from just being “The Johnson Twins” to being high school legends… Until somebody else throws a better party, that is. But we had at least a good while before that would happen, we'd be fine. I hopped out of bed and took a good long look at myself in the mirror, for whatever reason. I dunno. I looked like I'd just gotten out of bed, what with my raggy blonde hair and one nightie strap having slid down my shoulder, nearly pulling the front of my nightie down with it. I quickly pulled it back up and knew exactly what I needed to do. And that was take a damn
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Parallel Quests, Chapter 18
Chapter Eighteen - Hasty Departure The route we took to the northwest borough was very simple, just straight up the river. Of course, the part that wasn’t simple was that we had to wait until the rower got out of the boat for something and then we stole his boat. Cameron thought it was hilarious, Sari kept smirking the entire time and Artus… did Artus things. Which mostly meant sleeping. Every now and again, he’d raise his head and growl at somebody we passed by. I couldn’t tell if they knew we had stolen the boat or if they just wanted to stop and stare at the oddly colored, slightly large wolf. I spent the entire t
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Odin's Law, Chapter 5
Chapter 5 Once the four of us were sitting at a table at the local Steak N' Shake waiting for the (obnoxiously bored looking) waitress to get to our table, I took stock of Evan. Blonde hair, blue eyes, vaguely Eurasian looking, maybe a year's difference with me agewise, not overly muscular. He looked like the kind of guy any girl would fall for if she were looking for a handsome guy with a warm feel about him. But in spite of all that, I just couldn't put my finger on what he was. Whatever he was, he didn't seem threatening, but considering they hadn't told me about this, Lucas and Debi must not have known he wasn't human. How Lucas didn't
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TG/AR Caption: Not-So-Routine Check-up
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TG/AR Caption: Satisfied Customer
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TG Caption: Look at the Bright Side
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Noticing, Epilogue
“Kristie Deckard!” the principal called into the microphone. Kristie, her purple lipstick smile almost as bright as the lights in the auditorium. It matched the dress she was wearing under her robe, as well as the tattoo she got during Spring Break when we went down to Cancun. She was proud of that tattoo, for whatever reason. I was kind of annoyed with mine, but hers did turn out much better than mine did. I stood there in line with everybody else graduating. Larry was beside me, picking his nose like a disgusting pig. He yawned after a second, then put on a smile for whoever's camera happened to be panning past him at that mome
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Noticing, Day 7
When I woke up, Grant was still asleep. My top was still somewhere I didn’t really know, and I was still wrapped up with his arms. It was exactly as I’d fallen asleep, as if nothing had happened between when Grant and I were cuddling in front of the TV and now, at… Six thirty in the morning. The couch was still kinda sticky, the house was still a trashy mess, and so far as I could tell, Larry was still asleep up in his bedroom. But I remembered everything. I slid out from under Grant’s arms and realized, much like when I got up in the middle of the night, that I desperately had to pee. I laughed inwardly at the stupi
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Noticing, Day 6 Part 3
Laurie stepped forward. "What the hell is going on?" Mrs. Morfran shook her head. "Now now, young man, that's too strong a tone." "So what? Answer the question," I said, my own tone firm but concerned. "You as well, young lady. That's no way to speak to the goddess that fixed your wayward souls." "What?!" Laurie almost shouted. Mrs. Morfran looked up from her papers. "You couldn't see it, not by yourselves. You were too stuck, too… Lost. This gift I've given you, this change, is what you so desperately needed. If you hadn’t, things might have been very different indeed.” “What are you talking about?” I aske
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Noticing, Day 6 Part 2
The game ran over by about twenty minutes, but once all was said and done, our team beat the other guys 23 to 3. It was such a complete change from last week that I almost wondered if the guys had been replaced by a different team while we weren’t looking. You’d never think our team would be able to do that with a slight buzz. After we changed out of our uniforms, we waited for the guys in the hallway outside the locker room. I realized then that all of us were dating football players. I’d never noticed that before, but we were. It was weird, in a way, but cheerleaders dating jocks was kind of a stereotype. Not that I saw t
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Noticing, Day 6 Part 1
Today was the day. Today was The Day. The Day when Larry and I passed from just being “The Johnson Twins” to being high school legends… Until somebody else throws a better party, that is. But we had at least a good while before that would happen, we'd be fine. I hopped out of bed and took a good long look at myself in the mirror, for whatever reason. I dunno. I looked like I'd just gotten out of bed, what with my raggy blonde hair and one nightie strap having slid down my shoulder, nearly pulling the front of my nightie down with it. I quickly pulled it back up and knew exactly what I needed to do. And that was take a damn
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Parallel Quests, Chapter 18
Chapter Eighteen - Hasty Departure The route we took to the northwest borough was very simple, just straight up the river. Of course, the part that wasn’t simple was that we had to wait until the rower got out of the boat for something and then we stole his boat. Cameron thought it was hilarious, Sari kept smirking the entire time and Artus… did Artus things. Which mostly meant sleeping. Every now and again, he’d raise his head and growl at somebody we passed by. I couldn’t tell if they knew we had stolen the boat or if they just wanted to stop and stare at the oddly colored, slightly large wolf. I spent the entire t
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Audience Participation Event Over
So, it's come to an end and writing can now begin. Nobody claimed the final slot yesterday, so I'm gonna havta pick the 10th caption, but, I'm not saying what it'll be. You'll just havta learn when the story is posted. Speaking of, stories will be posted when finished. This could take days, this could take months, this could take hours, there's really no saying when each story will be finished and posted, but I ask you to be patient. They will be finished, they will be posted, and that's a guarantee. I wanna thank you all for participating, this was a fun event and maybe some day down the line, we'll go at this again. Onto the writing!
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Audience Participation Last Day
This is it, the 20th. One last day. Keep in mind, that's one last day my time, so you've got 12 hours and one last slot left. Just as a reminder of what's been chosen so far: Shiny Light Changing Teams Hot Girls Can't Jump This is All Wrong Conflicted Emotions Settled Emotions Daddy Says After School Good Plan, Bad Execution Writing for the tales begins tomorrow, and they shall be posted when each one is done. Bear in mind: I don't know what order I'll complete each story in, so for all any of us knows, any one of them could come first. Twelve hours. Get in there.
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Audience Participation Check-Up
So, with now two days (I'm posting this on the 18th my time, though I think for DA, it's already the 19th) and some change left over, I'm going to post a little update. Initial reaction to the Participation Event was surprisingly swift, to the point that within a couple days, seven out of ten slots were already requested. A list of those is: Shiny Light Changing Teams Hot Girls Can't Jump This is All Wrong Conflicted Emotions Settled Emotions Daddy Says I've already begun initial work on "planning" how the stories on these captions will be written, though understand that I've started none of them yet. I'm waiting until the 21st to get
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I hope so Josh, your work looks intersting.
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I see Josh, do you like to hear my idea when the time comes or nah.
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My name is Ryan and are you making any requests or not, Josh.