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CM: Don't Cry

another very late Anon commission.

While similar to startrek into the darkness's scene, it not related or a parody.

The situation is unknown, All I was given is that pinkie is dying ;_; and dash is desperate. And a screen cap from startrek movie to use as a guide.

so....I went with some kind of sickness I guess.. and kinda turn out to be similar to some part of S4 walking dead :o 

You can withstand this much blood eh folks?
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"PINKIE!!" She hollers, her hooves flailing at the glass barrier.

"R-Rainbow?" She opens her eyes, to the pained faces of her five friends. "G-Girls?"

"We're here, dear!" Rarity assured, Pinkie's injuries obviously dire.

"G-Gaia," the pink mare coughs up blood, breathing heavily. "safe?"

"Yes," the lavender alicorn nods, tears forming in her eyes. "You did it Pinkie! You saved the planet, all of us!!"

"T-That's good," she smiles, laying her head against the glass. "T-That's very good." Her eyes glance up to her friends, glancing at their dying friend. Rarity held Applejack, who was about to lose another family member; Fluttershy covers her face with her forelegs, bawling loudly. Twilight and Rainbow looks to the mare, tears pouring down their eyes.
"D-Don't cry, guys," she coughs again. "It all turned out okay? Right?"

"R-Right," Twilight nods, as Rainbow's hooves slide down the glass in disbelief. This was no joke, their friend was truly short for this world. "It did."

"Remember," Her eyes close, as her chest stops moving up and down. "Always smile."

The only thing that can be heard was the wailing of Rarity, and Fluttershy. The five mares glanced at the still body of everypony's friend, the Element of Laughter, and the party pony who gave them cheer. Rainbow stomps the ground, shaking her head as she cries "No," repeatedly; Applejack removes her hat, places it on her chest, a sign of mourning. Twilight turns away from the others, who eyes smoldering in violet mist, as well as her horn. Her teeth grits in anger, as her wings flare open.

"STARLIGHT!!" She hollers, taking off away from her grieving friends. "I'LL KILL YOU!! FOR PINKIE, FOR SPIKE!!"
artwarrior1985's avatar
Don't worry. Blood from Khan will save her!
wilnet1tractor's avatar
Don't cry,    Rainbow...............
Nightcaster460's avatar
Star Trek into darkness scene?
Oliver--Fey's avatar
I have been, and always shall be, your friend
rookie2's avatar
The character pinkie is portraying as was dying from radiation
Popular-by-Demand's avatar
no! When I saw this I thought of Kirk and Spock...
reiler12's avatar
Pyro will save there. lol
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Marceline347's avatar
XD if I were able to like comments, yours would be one.. XD
foxred1988's avatar
... Reminds me of corpse Party when your lovable lesbian dies. ;w;
trinson's avatar
"PINKIE!" Dash pounds her hooves on the unbreakable glass separating her from someone so dear to her.  Pinkie lays leaned up against the wall.  She does not move and she is covered in blood.  Her own blood.  "PINKIE!  Oh Celestia please no!"

Pinkies eyes begin to twitch as they slowly open.  She clutches the wound on her stomach as she can feel the warm flow of life trickle from it.  Her eyes turn first to see Rainbow pressed up against the glass and it makes her smile.  "D.Dashy ok."  She coughs up spattering blood down her mouth as she turns to face the window.  "Are.... are they safe?"

Dash's head falls to the window.  Her face soaked with tears.  "Ya!  You saved them girl.  Not even a.... a scra...." Dash falls down crying hard.  She can't stand this helpless feeling.  She wants to break the window down and fly Pinkie away.  She want her to live, but all she can do is watch her suffer.

Pinkie puts her hoof on the window with a light tap getting Dash's attention.  "Shhhhhh!  It's ok.  I...I had a g.good party.  I met so many ponies.  *COUGH* a...and I had you."  Pinkie smiles brighter as she coughs up more blood.  The warmth in her hooves has gone cold and she feel so weak.  "You have always... *COUGH*.. w.will always be...  My...... my... frie....."  Pinkies eyes close as her hoof falls to the floor.  

"NOOOOOOO!"  Dash pounds the window till her hooves bleed but it won't brake.  "Noooo no no no!  It should have been me."  She turns around and leans up against the window turning her head to look at Pinkie.  "The world needs you more.  How can we sing again?  How can we dance again?  How can any of us even smile again with out you?  Without laughter!"  She covers her face as her tears fall like rain and her heart races like thunder and pain.  "How can any of us live without you."  Her eyes close as she lays her head down.  She won't leave her.  So she lays there crying till she suddenly feels a bright flash of light on her eyelids.  She opens them fast to see what it was.  Only to be shocked at the what she sees before her.   "PINKIE!"  She cries out as she backs away before turning to run.  For what she saw was not her friend.  No for her friend was gone and no power in Equestria would stop Dash from finding out who took her.


I love your art.  So many times has it moved me, made me smile and just made me feel.   Now you I see this and my heart brakes.  My mind races to discover what happened.  Why she was there and separated from her friend.  You said it was based on the idea of the Star Trek death scene.  Jim or Spocks death scene really did not matter.  It was similar for both.  Though I was not content that she died from radiation, but something killed her.

Then again I was not satisfied that just die as well.  This is MLP:FIM.  This is fantasy and when your life is as important as hers.  You don't just simply die.

What happened to Pinkie at the beginning and the end.  Not sure, but feel free to let your imagination run wild.  I know mine has been.
toxicdemon10's avatar
i would think rd would be captain jack and twilight would be Spock right O.e
voreist22's avatar
kind of reminds me of doctor who
FlutterHugs's avatar
This is from the fanfic Scarlet Harvest where Pinkie is being boiled alive.
MLPFiMRox's avatar
Is that Star Trek Into Darkness I see?
YinReneeMoonveilYang's avatar
this picture is very well drawn OnO but it is sad 
InThyDreams's avatar
Full of fear,
Ever clear.
I'll be here,
Fighting forever.
You'll find me
Climbing to heaven.
Never mind,
Turn back time.
You'll be fine - I will get left behind.
The-Grey-Panther's avatar
Show me what it's like
To dream in black and white
So I can leave this world

Holding on too tight.
Breathe the breath of life,
So I can leave this world
InThyDreams's avatar
It only hurts just once.
They're only broken bones.
Hide the hate inside...
The-Grey-Panther's avatar
((So I can leave this world behind...))

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