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azarath

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Artist // Hobbyist // Digital Art
  • Aug 17
  • United States
  • Deviant for 21 years
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Yoshitaka Amano, Takeshi Obata, Junji Ito, Naoki Urasawa
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Comments

I forgot to mention how much I like the eyes. There's nice detail in there without going overboard (as a lot of anime artists do.. out tons of detail in the ey but no where else!). :thumbsup:
Kyuuketsuki Collab
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Like I said, I think it looks nice and i love the color choice for shading. What I think could help is a more defined light source, and then highlights on the hair to match. There really isn't one on the hair right now, especially since the light source seems to be coming up from straight on the front.

Your coloring is coming along amazing well recently. I'm envious. <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" />

Auuugh I have too many more words to fill in here! I hate this 100 word minimum stuff. I can give a critique in less than 100 words, obviously! <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt=":P" title=":P (Lick)" />
Kyuuketsuki Collab
:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

A nice character design! The anatomy looks great. The shading and coloring is handled pretty well, although the shadow on her shoulder (the one facing us) seems a bit strange towards the top there, like it's too dark for that angle. I like the outfit and would like to see the whole thing. The eyes are shaded well, but seem a bit too far apart and a bit... empty. Maybe some darker hues in the middle and towards the top of them would make her look less like she's glazed over. Other than that, a more dynamic pose could help give me an idea of what her personality is like. Can't really gather anything from her just standing there.

I think you're on the right track here! Your coloring, inking and anatomy look great, now just try and spice up the design a bit. <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" />
commented on 11/03/14 by twotonearmy
Thanks!  Wow, they couldn't have hid that in a more convoluted spot.