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Mature  |  Published: February 27, 2008
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an exercise in writing in a style completely different from my usual.

i came up with the basic idea behind this story a couple days past. pretty much i knew how i wanted it to end. i had no idea how i was going to get there.

this is the first time i have ever written anything in first person present tense.

all characters, locations, and events are fictional.

i have given it a mature flag as some people may be sensitive to the nature of a f/f relationship between a student and a teacher. also, suicidal overtones.

you will probably also notice there is a substantial amount of language i never use. please, forgive me that. it was needed for the story to have passable context.
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arielmt's avatar
I don't read many short stories, especially online, but this one just grabbed hold of me from the beginning and didn't let go until the end.

Bravo.
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oh, thank you. that is the kind of complement we all love to hear.

the only sad thing is, i can not duplicate that as i already did it. guess i will have to write something else.
NiniriAZ's avatar
Very deep. And very vivid. It's the kind of thing one
sometimes finds one "has" to do at times. To step
outside the box and one's comfort zone...to stretch
one's creativity and grow is sometimes a good thing.
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thank you for taking the time to read this and comment on it.

i am sorry i have not been around much to talk. i have been very busy.

i think you are correct. it was definitely something i had to do.
NiniriAZ's avatar
Nods, I know "busy", as I've been it of late. I hope things are going
well for you and your beloved!
Ayukawataur's avatar
very well yes.

just returned from that month in asia i told you about. now, i plan to just be home for a while to rest and be me.
NiniriAZ's avatar
Good luck with the writing, and enjoy the downtime! I'm sure it's well deserved... :)

Cheers,

Niniri
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Writing such a story in first person is really very chilling.
I do not wish to imply anything but, you have made it sound as if you know what it feels like to live with that kind of depression.
But then, that is one of the marks of a true author: spinning a convincing tale.
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it really is the first time i have written in first person perspective. i am happy to hear that i managed to communicate the feelings properly.
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