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Maid Fight 121 by avs3d Maid Fight 121 by avs3d
She would show no mercy; she would put this almond-eyed slut in her place...
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LeeRoyCrane Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2016
Love the wild, tangling aspect.

Also, it's great that your story also, in a subtle way, gives voice and shows perspective of one fighter at that moment.  In this case, we hear Agnieszka's point of view and she sees Ai Lin as nothing more than an "almond-eyed slut".  

I'm sure Ai Lin probably feels a similar sentiment about her opponent being a "round-eyed whore" or something similar.
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avs3d Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2016
i refrained from commenting as it would make a spoiler - yes, you accurately predicted what i had in mind, elaborating the story from both maids' (prejudiced and egotistic) point of view.
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