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Haiku Musings Part 2
Name Tag
Name on show; open
To all like a displayed book -
Just doing my job
Plastic
Jaw dropping looks, she’s
Only a Barbie doll; her Ken’s
Deadbeat and older.
Make Up Your Mind
Brain pulled both ways, a
Simple choice now fashioned with
Lack of decision.
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Haiku Musings Part 1
1. Insomnia
My emotions packed
Into bags beneath my gaze;
Can I shoot the sheep?
2. Torn Photograph
Faded laughter of
Once strong friendship; I repress
Their sweet memory.
3. Doubt
All movement cut off;
The boat sinks, no breathing air.
Pure darkness awaits.
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Haiku Request: The Love Of Chocolately Goodness
The first ever bite;
Mhm, how very delicious!
Chocolate chip goodness.
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Haiku Request: Earth's Tears
If it pours down, does
It mean Mother Earth's weeping?
Does she mourn like us?
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Haiku Request: Sun Kissed
She may has well be
Created from the Sun's heat;
She radiates gold.
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Haiku Request: Cold Invasion
Frost and ice attack
All that breathes; an invasion
That drives creatures south.
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I'm offering a collection of 12 haiku poems for 8 points. There are 4 slots available for commissions.

:bulletred: What is a haiku?



:star:Haiku is a Japanese poem which can also be known as a Hokku. A Haiku poem is similar to a Tanka but has fewer lines. A Haiku is a type of poetry that can be written on many themes, from love to nature. It also has a strict 5-7-5 syllable format.

Below are the haikus that I have done in the past:

Haiku Musings Part 11. Insomnia
My emotions packed
Into bags beneath my gaze;
Can I shoot the sheep?
2. Torn Photograph
Faded laughter of
Once strong friendship; I repress
Their sweet memory.
3. Doubt
All movement cut off;
The boat sinks, no breathing air.
Pure darkness awaits.
Haiku Musings Part 2Name Tag
Name on show; open
To all like a displayed book -
Just doing my job
Plastic
Jaw dropping looks, she’s
Only a Barbie doll; her Ken’s
Deadbeat and older.
Make Up Your Mind
Brain pulled both ways, a
Simple choice now fashioned with
Lack of decision.
Haiku Request: Devious SpinningsI weave words, all of
Silky deciet; my caccoon
Suffocates the weak.
Haiku Request: Tree's WisdomI've watched mankind grow;
The world progresses quickly
Yet it will end soon.
NaHaiWriMo Day 25: The Other WomanA bouquet of red
Roses; a symbol of his
Lust for her, not me.
NaHaiWriMo Day 24: Old AgeHis mind, a barren
Desert where nothing stirs, cut
Off from the real world.


Here are the slots:

1. :iconwyldwerewolf:

2. :iconlesleytoneb:

3. :iconpainfulkisses13:

4.

:star: You have the option of what prompts you want me to base your haikus on. Or you can let me choose.

:star: Any questions? Please ask away!

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GabyCoutino Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice gallery ♥
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iAmACandyUnicorn5103 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You are so awesome!! Thank you for all the comments and favorites!!
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My pleasure!
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Comments4You Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2016
Thanks for the fave! ^^
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You're welcome :)
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:D
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AceheroicX Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you for the Llama jump !
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AvidCommenter Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2016   Writer
Np!
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AceheroicX Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
D: thank you so much for the love! Naruto Dancing Love Bounce 
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