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"Yellow motorcycle equals... douche-bag, Einstein proved it." Brad Loekle, Worlds Dumbest Daredevils 2


"You’re only given a little spark of madness. Don’t lose it.” - Robin Williams


We think too much and feel too little - Charlie Chaplin


Magick can be a dangerous tool that leads to the demise of many kingdoms. Only if used wisely can it prove otherwise - Alvar van Wolfgang, Avathae, only on Webtoon CANVAS


Name: Shelby


D.O.B: March 11th


§Author and Illustrator of the Avathae Webtoon

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No problem! Just helping out a fellow deviant :)
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Hello there! you have requested a critique, yes?

Starters, my sister is a huge fan of this show, so I knew who these gals (and beasts) were right away, which is good since you are trying to capture them in a different species. While the majority of this image is great and highly recognizable, there are a couple of things that could use some adjustments:

In my honest opinion, I think each of the girls here should have their own ... body type? (I'm trying to find the right word, please forgive me). For example, Rarity is a fashion designer right? Well, to make her garg-self true to the shows character, she should have some volume in her waist, not too much though, since most models and such are thinner. Next off, Applejack is a farmer. Working on a farm builds a LOT of upper and lower body mass (muscle wise); so her gargoyle form should appear "larger" and "bulkier", thus making her a "warrior" like garg. Fluttershy, the only thing I have to say about her: since she is motherly, should have larger hips (that is just my opinion because I prefer to make my motherly characters posses larger "child bearing" hips). Now, moving on to Pinkie Pie. She eats a lot of sweets, but it balances out with all of that EXCESS ENERGY, but she should have a tiny bit of pudge, since sweets seems to be her main diet. I really don't have much to say about rainbow since her figure already appears athletic. I don't have much to say about twilight either because her body seems about average.

By the way, LOVE the beastie form!

I hope you find this to be a fair review <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>