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Avalanch3's avatar

Caught Ladybug

Made this in my spare time. I've been working on this over the past 3 or 4 days, testing various techniques. Constructive Criticism Appreciated.
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Fallen-Angel-Li's avatar
Aww, poor ladybug. That book makes it look worse. Your technique looks good to me, but I'm only really good in Photoshop and I haven't used that in about a year. So, I'm looking at it from a professional perspective.
CanenArt's avatar
I like it. It looks pretty neat. The only thing Im noticing is the book. Seem like the shadow on top is a bit dark. Other than that I really like it.

Keep up the great work.

Best Regards,

Jason :)
Avalanch3's avatar
made it with cinema 4d, and thanks for the suggestions.
athair's avatar
Interesting. ^_^
Also, welcome to deviantart! ^_^

Some constructive critism? Alright.

1) Glass looks a little thin (the walls), though that might just be because you don't have any
2) Shadows!, they can make a big difference in how the piece feels
3) The edges of the table - might want to add a little more geometry (maybe smooth the edges a tiny bit, even if you still want that sharp look)
4) You also might want more than one light in the scene (standard practice is 3 for test demos that aren't using radiosity)

Also, I see you use TerraGen (from you're other deviation). What program did you do this in?
jbskycastle's avatar
its cool I like it
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