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You're very welcome, I'm very glad it helped ! :hug;

Hello there !
So, this is my first time giving a critique <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>


Vision : First, I'd like to tell it's a very nice work. When I was younger, I used to love the W.I.T.C.H too, haha ^^

Originality : I can't give a good rate for the originality, since it is a fanart, and they wear the same clothes as designed by the illustrator. But I like the effect you've created with your composition, it is like they are shining. Their poses are very graceful, it gives a nice impression.

Technique : I really like your coloring and lining technique, it is very smooth. The touches of yellow reflections on Will's hair was a nice idea, maybe you could've done it on the other girls' hair too ? The anatomy is good too.

Impact : I think that if you have added more effects, it would have become even better ! Like, for example, adding wind for Hay lin and vegetation for Cornelia; you've done the fire for Taranee, but it's not very noticeable. With some other color nuances, it would have been even better. And since fire is a light source, you could've added more shades on her body. It would be the same for Will... Isn't the heart shinny, glowy, beautiful to see ?

This really reminded me much souvenirs, and this artwork was very nicely executed. Keep it up ! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart"/>

Thank you !

Thank you !!