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Chapter 1 – The High School Kid | Looking for feedback!
> Hi everyone! 😊
I’ve just published Chapter 1 of a supernatural coming-of-age story I’m developing, titled “The Biscuit Curse.”
This is part of a 27-chapter series I’m working on as a collaboration. Chapter 1 introduces Gary Wadeworth, a high school basketball player whose life begins to change in mysterious ways after a game — and a strange biscuit.
📘 Read Chapter 1 here:
https://www.deviantart.com/.../Chapter-1-The-High-School...
💬 I’d really appreciate your thoughts or suggestions:
– What did you think of Gary as a protagonist?
– Would you like to see more suspense, character development, or action in Chapter 2?
– Any favorite (or unclear) moments?
Thanks in advance to anyone who reads — even a short comment helps! 🙏
I’ll be continuing the series step-by-step and improving along the way based on feedback.
Hello fellow authors! My first book titled 'Mild Apparitions In Interstellar Drift' is available at Amazon.com. It's a book of scifi, fantasy and horror short stories and anthologies. I am working on my second book.
Thanks for the add. I have published books on Amazon and Lulu and Gumroad. I am a poet at Poetry and at AllPoetry.com and I have made a few blogs and FB pages too.