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'Oh come on, the water isn't THAT bad!!' by AurelleahFreefeather 'Oh come on, the water isn't THAT bad!!' by AurelleahFreefeather
Patreon reward for Azure Serenity, the purple one. She's afraid of water and mischievous Aurry's trying to pull her back in. Rozelle is older than both of them, making sure they stay safe <3

Monochrome version  BeachTrioAureAzeRozzyHALFmono by AurelleahEverfree

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This is the most beautiful art piece ever!It has so much detail and it bled together all so well..!Its also kinda funny~I would love to have made such artwork.The water is so detailed so are the ponies.If I were you having art like this would make you the most popular pony artist EVER!!!(I wish I had your hands.)Being this talented is such a gift.I love all your art..which is more beautiful than anything I could make.I still use bases in my 2 years of drawing pony art..You are the best artist I have ever known.I love you so much!This talent is..wow.
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I dig this. It's not perfect, but it's pleasing to the eye and very unique.

You did a great job with the ponies. The shading is logical and consistent across all of the characters. I especially like how you used shadows to show the ponies' fur and give depth to your OC's wing. The shadow left by the wave leaves a nice effect too. Besides the shading, I like how you drew the wet manes, and your OC's expression is cute. However, I feel like there's some inconsistencies with body proportions. With your OC, I can tell you were trying to account for the left side being further from the viewer than the right side, but I think you overdid the difference a little. Also, I think Azure's hind right leg is longer than it should be.

I like the scenery and the feel you were going for with it. It's not often that you see so much effort put into beach scenery. It makes me think of the Pacific coast of North America, or possibly the shore of a large lake. One thing I could add though is that the shore in the background should be less saturated or blurrier to show distance.

You could work on body proportions a little, but otherwise it's a pretty solid picture. I don't know if the idea for the picture was yours or the commissioner's, but it's nice seeing unique pictures like this. I look forward to seeing your pictures in the future.
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Duskie-06 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww... this is so adorable! I especially love the expression of the pony trying to get out of the water xD
And wow, I also love the way how you paint water, it looks so realistic! Keep up the good work Aurelleah!
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Bioshock140 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2017
Awesome!
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Renarde-Louve Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2017
Azure is like -Nooooo!!, Aurry : -yes! come back.
So funny XD, amazing work
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LeDaverix Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thehe, this one is hillarious :D
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draftomatic Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017  Professional General Artist
How can you always make Aurelia look so cute? XD
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AurelleahFreefeather Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
hehe you just have to be one with the pone <3
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jamestkelley Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww, so cute and silly! Azure has that look on her face like 'you'll pay for this, mark my words'.
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AurelleahFreefeather Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
She actually has a D:> sort of eyebrow, more fearful, its too bad I didnt make it easier to see tho D:
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jamestkelley Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no no, it's my fault. still lovely.
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SniperHayden117 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017
I love it, so pretty.
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Macniel Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so much yes!
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NeverLastStanding Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2017  Hobbyist
THIS IS REALLY, REALLY, REALLY, REALLY GREAT. I loveeeeeeee the water a lot, there is so much depth in it & I just love the realistic aspect of the background & how well it mixes with the cute ponies. The tides of the water & the sloshes that are created really give way for the interaction of the characters & the setting which I love the display of. Poor Azure ;~:
Also just want to say that the lighting & shading is so well done as you can see on Aure with the shading from the wave which I love that touch of detail as also just all around. The background is very lovely with those arches as it gives the dynamic feel & cozy nature of this entire piece. It's very soothing & cute
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AurelleahFreefeather Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Thanka aphix ^-^
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ChaosPhantom444 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Great scene! XD
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CelestialRainicorn Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2017
Man that's a pretty sweet reward. Lucky pick!
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AurelleahFreefeather Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
His reward is basically 100$ per month towards a commission, kinda like subscription based, so every couple months he gets something big
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CelestialRainicorn Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2017
Whoa cool that sounds like a pretty nice investment. Like if he wanted to Commission you every so often
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SweetBrew Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
The water reflection/shadow on her flank looks very authentic... Like... seriously authentic.
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AurelleahFreefeather Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
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