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Gaia Origins: The Hunter Clans  page 1 by AuraLeighDragon Gaia Origins: The Hunter Clans  page 1 by AuraLeighDragon
An Origins story i wrote for the world my friend rp in. Same as the Twin stars~ (planning on making a comic for them too)
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kiwii-marshmallow Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
It's a good start. :) As someone who has a professional comic book artist for a professor, I would suggest changing the font. Cursive should be used for titles or to begin a sentence. After that it should be easier to read. Please don't say, this is just for fun, or its my style or something like that. I'm truly trying to help you. I had nice people give me critique on my comics when I was younger and I ignored them and I regret it. Especially because I ignored them because I thought there's no way I'll be doing this for a living, it's just a hobby. Yet, here I am, doing it for a living. :) So, you never know with you, too! :heart:
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AuraLeighDragon Featured By Owner Edited Jan 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks and yea >w< i'll probably do that with the next page. my hands hurt after writing all that cursive xD. Also even though these comics are just for fun, it is more for trying new things and working in other places that need it, so any critic is helpfully~

Edit: also >w< you've had alot more art training then i have xD i just have years of drawing anime characters traditionally xD and only one art college course under my belt >w<;;;
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kiwii-marshmallow Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
No problem. :) If you have any artistic questions or want help, just ask. I'd be happy to assist ;P
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AuraLeighDragon Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks~
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kiwii-marshmallow Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
:)
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