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Ultra Genesis Part 21: Totem battle!
Standing on the pile of rocks, the young man couldn't take his eyes off the giant creature. Its face seemed to invade his mind, echo'ing through his thoughts until there was nothing he could do but stare. The air was heavy with water beyond the rain pelting down around him. The creature's mere existance seemed to create a great pressure around it. The most uncomfortable part for Kaili however, was the rain; soaking through his clothes. The wet fabric clinging to his scales, getting easily caught between them as he moved. He didn't see the attack coming, exactly, only felt the rush of the air as this creature's giant spindly leg struck out at him. Without time enough to move out of the way properly, Kaili simply spun on the spot. The leg slammed hard into his back as he leant forward, cradling the little cubone in his arms. He felt the pain ripple down his back. Down, not up. It felt as if the collision had hurt the attacker as well, with how the leg returned to the water. But that wasn
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Ultra Genesis Part 20: Brooklet Hill
The young man shrugged at the girl before turning to the tree flanked path. The passage was dark, and wound around two corners before opening once again. Upon finally seeing the trial site, Kaili couldn't help but feel the winding was meant to hide it. His eyes were intentionally funnelled to the area at the right moments, with view he could never truly compare to anything. He was standing at one end of a large pool of water, which sat like a plate jutting out of a cliff face on this side of the island. Over the edge of the far side he could see in the distance the rim of another pool of water. The liquid near his feet sat so still as to be possibly a layer of glass. A small wooden bridge lead from where he stood to a fence at the other side. The wooden planks creaked a little at his footfalls, sending perfectly symmetrical ripples across the pond. The ripples lapped and bounced from the edges, and where they crossed the far edge, little sloshes of water would trickle out of the pool a
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Ultra Genesis Part 19: Route 5
The grass around the road north of the farmhouse returned to a pleasant green colour. Two sidepaths branched from the road as it wound its way to the left. A large man in trial guide attire was grumbling at some children next to a large sign. The cubone, asleep in the young man's arms, curled in closer against his chest. A... Boy, would be how Kaili would later describe him, approached. The fellow was slightly taller than the young man, with green eyes and exceptionally sharp features. His blond hair was combed back in ridges on the left side of his head, while it bent forward in flat masses on his right. As if he was purposefully attempting to show both 'sophistication' and 'emotional instability'. The boy had two clips on his left ear, perhaps on his right as well if you could see through the shade of an explosion. His clothes were almost completely ruined. A black shirt so ripped and decayed that individual threads could be seen weaving in the gaps like a long abandoned cobweb. Surp
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Ultra Genesis Part 18: Bad Night :iconatlassniperman:AtlasSniperman 1 0
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Ultra Genesis Part 17: Akala landing
Even in the crystal clear night sky, the island looked impressively massive. A tremendous volcano's body forming much of the island's main body. A flatish plateau spreading from the base, like a green beach, laying so low the tide threatens to sweep it all away each day. A small island sits to the right, not flat like the beach but possessed of no-where near the grandeur of the volcano. Specks of lights shone on the streets a few locations. Their lights almost drowned by the great red and gold glow of the mountains peak. The town in direct line from Melemele bore a dock, wheresat several ferries. The town was, despite the modern urban architecture, little more than a single street. Even in that regard, the buildings sat on only one side of the road. The asphalt screeched when the great birds iron claws tore at it upon landing. Once on solid ground, Kaili allowed himself to slide off the pokemon's back. Lacking its pokeball, he patted the creature's sharp wingblades twice before it flew
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Ultra Genesis Part 16: Leaving Melemele
In a flash of red light, the old man 'Hala' returned his pokemon to its chamber hanging from his belt. "Hmp" The man grunted, staring unmoving at the young man as the crowd grew quiet. Kaili refused to look away. As long as he concentrated on the man standing opposite him, nothing hurt yet. "The results come as no surprise to me. I must say you played me quite well there!" He roared with laughter. With long strides more befitting of a younger and fitter man, he crossed the platform to shake the young victor's hand. As the massive paws clasped around his smaller hand, Kaili felt a rock being pressed into his palm. "Accept this Z-Crystal!" Hala beamed, stepping back. Kaili had no choice but to clench his hand else drop the object onto the platform in front of him. Hala waved to a point in the crowd and in under a second, the boy Hau was almost shoulder to shoulder with Kaili. "Observe, boys. If you wish to use the Fighting-type Z-Power-" He continued,
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Ultra Genesis Part 15: Melemele Grand Trial
Again the young man found himself sitting at an outdoor table in a small rural town. Sheltered from the sun by the patio roof. The table bore one chair, while three tables nearby each housed five. He tried to imagine the world was silent. Pushing the sounds away from him as he stared at the tabletop. Quietly he grumbled, gently disconnecting some scales from each other and his shirt. His eyes started closing before the clatter of plates somewhere nearby jolted him back awake. The left of his top lip curled slightly at the noise but he resumed his very important exercise of awaiting the coffee. Breakfast was bought with the money Hau had given him the day before. This is how he was going to have to live, surviving off the prize money of battles, and his own wits in the wild. He'll tell the professor not to worry about him staying there any more. Had to assert his independence. 'assert independence' what is he, 12? Clearly, one in the afternoon is too early for Kaili to be pretending to
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Ultra Genesis Part 14: Hau are you?
In the darkened cave, lit only by moonlight sliding in across the waters lapping in and out of the small entrance deeper in, the young man knelt beside a small collapsed pokemon. "Mr Balloon" He whispered to the pokemon bobbing around him. "Get Nebby" The pokemon whistled and floated off to the side, where it wrapped its streamers around the limbs of the small pokemon. Kaili wasn't even certain how that worked, Nebby looked to be made of gas, but he didn't question it. Instead the young man turned his attention to the blade laying beside him. Its hilt was resting on the smaller pokemon. "I know. It wasn't your fault." He whispered, placing a pokeball against the blade, resulting in it disappearing in a flash of light. Gently, Kaili scooped Monkey King up, holding him in as secure method as he could as he moved over to the rock the other pokemon was curled up on. Gently stroking its fur, Kaili could see small callouses on its back fur. He knew what this pokemo
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Ultra Genesis Part 13: Unlucky :iconatlassniperman:AtlasSniperman 0 0
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Ultra Genesis Part 12: Buzz and Tiny :iconatlassniperman:AtlasSniperman 0 0
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Ultra Genesis Part 11b: The First Totem
The black clad youth 'Liam' called to his friend, pointing out one of the holes Kaili had found the rodent in. "I wouldn't do that" Kaili noted as Liam's hand approached the hole. "He bites" The youths nodded, Liam picked up a rock, tossing it up as he smiled at the Trialgoer. He stood beside the hole and began bashing at the area around the hole with the stone. Kaili quickly pointed out the other hole to Jake, who jogged over, pulling out his phone as he went. The song that started blaring from the phone was kind of obnoxious and repetitive, but Kaili didn't particularly mind. He could clearly hear a couple guitars and a steady drumbeat, but at the volume Jake was playing it, he couldn't make out much of the lyrics beyond 'Team Skull' and 'Get down'. The cacophony of the two youths as they 'stepped up their game' did however, start to give the young man a migraine. But it was working, the black and cream rodent had wriggled its way to the hole Kaili was stationed at.
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Ultra Genesis Part 11a: First trial begins
The young man placed his empty foam cup down on the table, glancing around at the pokemon surrounding him. "Anyone want another berry?" Kaili asked, but when no response came he stood. He tapped each pokeball once in turn with the exception of Mr. Balloon's, watching as each pokemon vanished in red light. The tendrils of the balloon twirled in his hair before knotting and anchoring the floating purple pokemon to the spot a couple centimeters off the young man's head. "First trial it is then." The two left the building, stepping out into the cool night air, breathing in the salt from the sea behind the center. "There's not much about the Alola trials online. Wonder if they're like the gyms back home." He shrugged, strolling down the stairs as the balloon bobbed happily as an extension of his steps. The cavern ahead bore a large, well maintained sign that read 'Verdant Cavern'. Vines wrapped around the edges but were well pruned to prevent their spread over the
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Ultra Genesis Part 10: Monkey King
The path back to the main road was a gentle slope. Wide enough for a procession of people, with a path worn from their passage over the years. Ivy, at the end of the path turned left, skipping back to Hau'oli city. The young man could almost imagine the people passing him, four at the front with a coffin mounted between them, and the rest walking behind. His journey up the road had not consisted of such thoughts, but knowing what was at the end behind him, Kaili couldn't help but imagine. The trees grew over the path like bowing guardians of green, their branches over his head knotted into each other to form a strong mesh overhead. It was probably always this dark, even during the day.
Due to his internal musings, Kaili didn't seem to notice the rustling of branches around him. Only small ones, but their every movement echoed the muscletwitches of a small beast. It was about the height of the young man's hip, but felt so much bigger from its perch above him. Its eyes narrowed as it wat
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Ultra Genesis Part 9: Hau'oli Cemetery
'Melemele Island' the large sign near the northern gate of Hau'oli city read. The sign bore an overhead map of the island, with a selection of little dots representing points of interest. 'Hau'oli city' was a large red dot with small text under its title, simply reading 'You are here'. Northward were 'Melemele Motel', 'Hau'oli Cemetary', 'Big wave beach' and around the north side was a small dot labelled 'Verdant Cavern'. As Kaili's finger touched the point to trace the shortest path to Hau'oli City, suddenly the sign was bathed in flickering red and orange light. He could hear screaming behind him and gunshots. Slowly, so as not to draw attention if he was just imagining it, the young man turned his head to look at the carnage behind him. Pokemon were fighting in the street and men in black clothes were waving guns at those who were trying to hide in alleys. A helicopter overhead drew his attention up, and to a massive white funnel of light in the sky... and as suddenly as it had begu
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Ultra Genesis Part 8: Team Skull
Kaili slunk away from the crowd as quickly as he regained his senses. He stumbled down a quiet alley with a single shape at the end of it. The man sitting at the fence overlooking the water had the strangest silhouette; A rotund torso with a large brimmed hat. As the young man drew closer, it became clear that the hat was made of some form of woven bark in a circular pattern with six extensions. The man was sitting with his legs through the fence and his arms atop the main railing, looking out. "I- Hear" The voice was staggered and broken. "Hear you there." the voice didn't sound right, as if it was struggling for words but speaking fluently at the same time.
"Excuse me?" Kaili raised his right eyebrow as his head lowered to the right, standing straight but ready to run.
"I know you" The man turned to look at him, green eyes hollow and unfocused, blonde hair cut strangely and right half of his mouth smiling.
"Are you okay?"
"I am well, t
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Ultra Genesis Part 7: Shopping Trip
"Hello Sir" The woman behind the counter smiled sweetly, her head tilting to the left. "I am the pokemon center nurse" She continued, with the same perky, kind tone. "I am here to help. This message is being delivered in English because your passport, which was scanned when you entered, is from Unova." She nodded once, blankly staring at or maybe through Kaili. "If you would like to change this setting, just say so. If English is sufficient, we welcome you to Alola. The pokemon center is here to help." The young man shrugged and placed his three pokeballs on the counter. "I will take your pokeballs for a moment, to heal your pokemon. You will be able to see them at all times, no harm will come to them." The 'woman' bowed slightly and the pokeballs were grabbed by three long mechanical arms from behind the counter. They looked almost like the claws of those skill-tester games, long and spindly with only three prongs each. The machines placed
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Hey everyone.
I'm a programming student who likes to write in his 'spare' time.
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