Kami - Cry of the Phoenix

Wait, you did all those images by mouse on your computer? That's amazing! I'd show you my one and only attempt at that, but I've asked Red not to let it see the light of day. Let's just say there's a very good reason why I do sprite kamis. Seriously, I think you're artwork is good, second only to Robinton, thus far my favorite kami artist.

As for the story, it looks like a good start, so don't give up, it could be the next Aledarte. And I read your notes, we all get a little lazy with our kami at times when we realize how much work is required to make it look the way we want. There are a lot of repeat images in a lot of kamis(all of mine for instance), so don't worry about cheating or taking shortcuts, just don't draw attention to it. The only one that stood out this time was the image of god creating man reused as the spirit making the spectral avatar. That's only one repeat image that stood out, otherwise, 99.99% rocking kami!