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An attempt to break back into the swing of fanfiction writing. 
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Incredible story, and very well written although a few grammatical errors here and there, I would suggest maybe grammerly or have a friend proofread it. Aside from that the story has nice progression and suspense, had me fooled in the first paragraph, keep it up.