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Celestia's Yearning pag 17 (English)

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Kyoshi001's avatar
sombra good now? intregiing...
fotland42's avatar
It is important to have proof.

But I think that a letter certifying his reformation and stamped with a royal seal would do just fine. The ponies of Equestria have a great deal of faith in their princesses.
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AstroanimationsHobbyist General Artist
mmm... that's true
karkovice1's avatar
I don't think anypony has ever used so many words to try to say "I love you", and she hasn't even said THAT part yet. ;P
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AstroanimationsHobbyist General Artist
Well, you know, the nerves
JustJoeKing's avatar
I bet Sombra smell like an old beauty salon with his cheesy fo greasy haircut.....
timgil's avatar
As English seems not to be your first language, allow me to offer some ways you might improve the grammar.

First Panel
First sentence should either be "It would be better if I explain it to you" or just "It would be better if I explain."

Second Panel
"But all of you saved me and eliminated all that evil, didn't you?

Third panel
That's what happened in theory, but please understand; I need the ponies to stay calm and not to start a riot if any pony recognizes you.

Fourth panel
Wording is a bit awkward here. I'd say (second sentence) "It would be a problem if all the ponies were scared of me, even more so if we're going to a big city.
Last sentence could either go "Let's do it then" or "Okay, let's do it."
AJR001's avatar
Hope it ends well... ^^;
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AstroanimationsHobbyist General Artist
me too
Seether00's avatar
She's going to try and kiss him and use him as a substitute. 
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AstroanimationsHobbyist General Artist
Yup, but she will have a surprise hehe
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BB-KHobbyist Writer
Evil in him again? Hmm.... a small trace. I wonder where this goes.
tigreanpony's avatar
OH this will be tricky
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AstroanimationsHobbyist General Artist
yup
rinalin321's avatar
... i see only bad things about to happen
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AstroanimationsHobbyist General Artist
like what? fella thinking ( Reactions ) 
rinalin321's avatar
well either a i love you confession or a you look like someone i love or a complete and utter mental break down
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Bloodshot049Student General Artist
What has celestia been doing behind my back
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MiragePotatoHobbyist Digital Artist
she is going to show him "her sunny side"
JustJoeKing's avatar
*knocks on your door*
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