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Littles Witches



Watching Little Witches Academia and having a good and nice time with the wonderful setup and characters.

So with Samain creeping on us, let's draw witches. Let's just hope the Black Man is occupied elsewhere.

Two assembled pencil doodles on A5 sketchbook. Critiques are welcome, I'm not used to draw every anatomy parts in order...
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I really like the whole composition of this piece. I especially love those lanterns hanging from the broomsticks! Those are extremely useful i would say >.< . Like you've mentioned,anatomy is lacking a little here. Maybe you could work on that. The line art seems a little messy but I don't know if you intended it to be that way. I mean, messy line arts also have a beauty to them! Love the line shading you did. You could try and add extra lines to areas that have more depth and shadows. Lastly, I think the eyes could be a bit more detailed. These are just my personal suggestions. I really really love how this turned out just the way it is!<3