Yes, interesting angle and sensitive expression.
Had I not browsed the gallery, I'd would not have known you posted this. I'm still not getting notifications when artist's on my watchlist post their work.
yes. It's a mess. And check your statistics to see if they make sense. Mine are wonky, so useless.
Anyway, enough about Eclipse. I like that you attacked the subject matter here directly from life, making all the decisions yourself, instead of following the lead of someone else. You already have more than enough practice with technique - the benefit now comes from experimenting with ways to use it.
This one has some peculiar effects due to the ways in which tone and line interact. But don't take it the wrong way - peculiar doesn't mean bad.