Well, to be honest...IT LOOKS LIKE SHIT Nah just kidding! For your first attempt EVER it looke pretty good. But still... I'd suggest you to draw the black outlines a bit thinner, drawing them that thick wouldn't be as appealing as drawing them thinner Another issue here is that you nee to learn to position the fore legs, they look a bit closer to the center of the body, try putting them a bit more to the left, and the hind legs look ok Also, if you're planning to draw with flat colors, I'd suggest you to redefine the outlines. For example, if you have a thick line, make the edges thinner, rather than having all the lines with the same thickness Don't get me wrong, it still looks awesome for your first attempt, and I'm sure that eventually you'll start to get better and better. If I offended you with something sorry, I didn't mean that One last thing, if you want to make you drawings look 20% cooler I suggest you to use Cell Shading
As soon as I just read "DOTA" I was almost shitting my pants, and then as soon as I just read "Gyrocopter", I've exploded
You did an awesome job here, good concept, you first did with the "thinking with portals" thing, and now you came out with this... The only flaw I detect here is that you did the standing animation of her in the map so good that I thought you could move, but NO, only got the spells previews. Still awesome, but anyway, my bad <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/e/d…" alt="" title="derpyhoovesplz"/> But there's something else. It was a bit blank for me her quotes...Don't get me wrong but knowing Pinkie Pie, she could have more quotes in only one attack, just saiying she should never stop talking until she say the final quote like "I call it combos"
Overall, this is my favourite MLP animation -NO. My favourite of ALL your animations you did so far
To begin with, I like the concept, the idea of Discord like this...I like it, a lot I found it nice, and quite original
The drawing itself its OK, Good shadows, and the background of the sky and mountains are pretty well done Maybe one little flaw I detect here is the grass. Good work here, but Discord's shadow makes part of the grass look like flat floor, except for the othe grass that stands non shaded near the white line
The technique isn't bad, I find it quite simple, but Good
By the way, I liked the idea of having the rules of this game in the description <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Thumbs Up"/>
There's not too much to say I really love the colors, the twilight scene, and Derpy itself But the picture itself is quite "simple" The sun...perfect Derpy's shadows are quite good, as the grass But I find the lack of shadows in the mountain at the back a bit odd, as the sky. But that's only my oppinion, its still pretty good Speaking about the technique and style...there's nothing wrong with anything but Derpy. I think her right front leg is a little out of place, like some centimetres more forward, and that can ruin the illusion of her walking or trotting properly
No matter I found this quite "simple", I'd rather call it "original" I've seen lot of thing involving Derpy but I never seen something like this..."relaxed"