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Ainulindale 4 by ashpwright Ainulindale 4 by ashpwright
I personally think about the balance between the image and text in composing comic, and this one is kinda failure in that point of view.

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saphir93 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2018  Professional Traditional Artist
Melkor, oh you sexy dark lovely bastard Love la in love Heart Love :love: rvmp Monkey love Dignity Laugh Ebil Laugh Llama Emoji-01 (Laughing) [V1] 
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045-lucky Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2018
I love these pieces, they are stunning!
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
The English text is not an exact quote from the Silmarillion, is it the translation of the quenya text in tengwar? 
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ashpwright Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2018
you're right man

i personally wanted to put a dialogue in quenya
but i wasn't a master of Tolkien's creative language to translate every words i write
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry, I don't understand now... You did the translation to quenya and transcription to tengwar, or did you take it from somewhere? I'm just learning the tengwar, and I would like to know how reliable this text is, because I am not sure about some parts. Great depiction of the Music of Ainur, by the way!
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ashpwright Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2018
sorry for my bad explanation

i didn't do the translation by myself
and took the text from the translation done by other person
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I just don't understand why you would translate a translation when you have the original that you can quote...
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ashpwright Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2018
that was just my silly insistence

i wanted to put the quenya dialogue, and i wasn't able to find the full translation of original text in quenya
and also, many things had to be summarized in length or detail of text, and that version of text was quite appropriate for this work.
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Irjikor Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2018  Professional Writer
Agreed. I suspect that much as well
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Irjikor Featured By Owner Edited Sep 25, 2018  Professional Writer
Very impressive. The Ainulindalë is by its very nature a difficult thing to visualise, and I am always on the lookout for people who manage to give it a good shot. Thusfar, I am excited and impressed by your rendition. Clap 

Also, Wasserwaldnymphe does indeed raise a good point. Some distinction between Melko and the Eternal Void might be interesting, though even when you decide to keep Melko's influence visualised as black, the correlation between the two might emphasise their opposition to Eru's harmonious creation.

I hope to see you finish the Song. Looking forward to it
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Wasserwaldnymphe Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Illuvatar looks mighty, though. 
Maybe Melkor needs another color than black. Hard silver, maybe? If the vast space is already black and Melkor is black, it looks like he is everywhere. These are my thoughts on this. I like the picture. Of the four pictures you've uploaded this is the first one I saw.
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ashpwright Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2018
i kinda agree with your opinion.

However, as you might have noticed on my other works,
I'm not that used to colored work or digital work.


I preferred not to use black again for the melody of Melkor
but lack of experience made it hard to visualize my concept of disorder of color.

by the way thank you for your thoughtful comment!
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Wasserwaldnymphe Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm looking forward to your next pictures! 
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