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UT of the Exile, Iss. 2, Page 8

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The Exile accepts an offer.

The Exile is really beguiling in the last panel, at least, that's my opinion. If you listen to a play through of Kotor 2, you'll see how much dialog I actually cut out of the game with this page and the last. it was a lot of exposition that helped a player out if they hadn't played the first Kotor, but made no sense for the Exile to be lost on. We'll finally get out of this room on the next page. Hurrah!

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OllieRamone's avatar
Meetra (The Exile) looks hot as hell.
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notshortonawsm General Artist
yay! :D can't wait for more
BanzaiSquirrel's avatar
Looking great!! Keep it up!
Karnzun's avatar
.......................... This is splendid.
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RoverGirlHobbyist General Artist
Wow!
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Fischmeister4Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha I love Atton in the first panel :XD: I always wanted to punch him during that dialogue...
Russariel's avatar
Love it! Oh and goodness I hope you're exile falls for Atton, Scoundrel power rarr!
Lord-Martini's avatar
Nice page, this one.. Especially the expressions on first and last panel :)
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AshleyKayleyHobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much!
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So are you planning this as a "canon" rendition of KOTOR 2? I know that the Exile canonically is supposed to be female (which is awesome!) but I also know that Handmaiden is also supposed to join the group in canon also...which is impossible when playing a female since you're forced to bring the Disciple along. So are you going to follow do some switch up, continue on as if you were playing as a female player, or maybe even have them BOTH join the party with the Exile (which I think would be MOST awesome :D). Not telling you how to write your own work though. You are doing a great job already, I was just a little curious. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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AshleyKayleyHobbyist Digital Artist
I was planning on having both Disciple and Handmaiden join, because I believe they both bring important pieces to the story. From what I've read, canonically is sent along either way, which makes the most sense. Atris would want to have her hand in, whether the Exile was male or female. :)
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Sounds like you have everything covered. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for us :D
CortosisKylee's avatar
Nice job, I love how you cut down on the dialog so seemlessly! Great job on this once again! (PS your Atton just keeps getting better and better each time! :love: You draw him so well!)
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AshleyKayleyHobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! He's not easy draw, but I enjoy the challenge!
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TarturusHobbyist Digital Artist
Your comic is coming along well. ^^

And I undersatnd why you'd need to cut out a fair deal of the game dialogue. That much dialogue just wouldn't work well in a comic.
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AshleyKayleyHobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! Yes, can't have a comic be too dialogue heavy, since it's a format that caters to aesthetics.
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