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The Snow...

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The snow tells me where I am.
Who I've been.
What I do.

The snow tells me what I think.
What I like.
What I do.

The snow is a friend of mine.
The snow is love.
The snow is you.

No one likes me like you do.
And, so I know.
The snow is you.

The snow is you, inside of me.
The snow is love.
My love in life.

The snow can mend the way I like.
To build a person.
My love in life.

But, the snow is you.
So, in spring.
The snow shall leave.

Just as you left me here.
The snow shall leave.
The snow is you.

Alone, in life.
The snow is gone.
And, so is love.

The snow, it told me what I loved.
That I loved...
The snow was you...
I wrote this when I was thinking about Catie...and then I realized that we hadn't had any snow this winter yet...so I wrote this ...
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EasternHysteria's avatar
Aww... A really touching piece.
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Thanks...
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Nice poem. I like it, it's really cool. Too bad it never snows in Arizona...
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XD That's really not the point...
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I know, but still. If it snowed here, I might be able to read this poem to someone...
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I don't think you could ...
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Yeah, only if it snowed one winter for a while...
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out of every poem that i have read of yours my heart broke alittle more,don't worry ashken u'll fined someone worthy of your love.
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Thank you...I like your Avatar, by the way...I like Ino :D
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lol, ashken ur a goofball.
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:D Thank you, fellow Ino supporter...
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omg its so cute! i cant believe its so well written and stuff! i applaude you as a fellow writer! :bow: :clap:
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TY, random person who is a fellow writer :D
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oh, blame AnimeOtaku for that, he gave me the link
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XD oh...cool :P check out my other stuff while you are here :P
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vincentsloverHobbyist Writer
okay, can do!
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That's interesting. And I'm sorry for all that is going on.
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Ashken18Hobbyist Artist
It's okay ^^ I just feel the need to express myself sometimes...
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I know...but when I do, I get looked at funny, so I avoid it.
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