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Too many moths by Ashdei-san Too many moths by Ashdei-san
My OC, Alice.
Here are another paintings of her: +1+  and +2+
I want to improve my skills, so i'll be very appreciate to comments and critique if you have some!Fox emoji - hearts

Corrected. Thanks to all commenters!

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Xorsama Featured By Owner May 10, 2017
waaaaw amazing
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Ashdei-san Featured By Owner May 11, 2017  Hobbyist
Thank you !Hug 
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Xorsama Featured By Owner May 11, 2017
^^
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Golden-Ares Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think you've done very well on her hair and on her clothing. The hair has a nice fluffy look and I love the parts where the light shines at it. The clothes have a lot of details and are very interresting also they fit her well and give her personality!
(I was wondering if she may is a pirate ore something?)
Her wand is very nicely done too. Bunny Emoji-31 (See you later) [V2] 

I like the fabric on her pants and on her mantle but I think her top looks a little stiff. I'm also a little irritated about the perspective. Do we look up to her or are we on the same high? The position of her facial features suggest that she looks down at us but her view is straight. 

I would suggest to let more space between her mouth and her nose. Since I feel like they are a little too close together. 

The eyes are way to big. I can understand that a lot of people /including me) liek to draw big eyes, it seems to be misplaced in this drawing and very irritating. Same goes for the lashes, they are as thick as her hair streaks are which seems to be a little extreme ^-^

Anyway overall it's a very beautiful drawing and I think you've done a great job bunny rub emoji 

I hope this was helpful and it would be great if you could leave me a critique as well (you don't have to of course) .:Bunny love:. 
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Ashdei-san Featured By Owner May 11, 2017  Hobbyist
Thank you so much for you opinion! I will think about it, so far i'm not very good in perspective, so it's was very nice of you to point my mistakes ^_^

Ok, i'll try, but i'm not pro, so my opinion wouldn't be very valuable.
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TheCelesticWarrior Featured By Owner May 10, 2017
I definitely agree about the eyes.
Considering that it's kind of a blend of realism and abstract styles, the eyes are too big for it. Shrinking them a small but would definitely work out for that.
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