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The night creeps softly, lending me no comfort
I hear the far-off traffic noises muted by the wind
They call like the reminder of the distant past
Whose nightmares have paraded through my heart
In my space there is a disconcerting stillness echoing
My heart readily recognizes the pain it finds within
I am without a noble calling bringing me to sleep
Nor do I find a tatter of solace to cling to me
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Barosus Featured By Owner 4 days ago   Writer
Dark and tragic but beautiful.  
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Asahi-Taichou Featured By Owner 4 days ago
Thanks.
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BlackLacedMinx Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2018  Student Writer
I love this~ :)
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Asahi-Taichou Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2018
Thanks.
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BlackLacedMinx Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2018  Student Writer
You're welcome
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PrecariouslyPeculiar Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2018  New Deviant  Writer
I love this, especially: "I am without a noble calling bringing me to sleep." This is so painfully relatable Hug Heart  
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Asahi-Taichou Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2018
Thanks. :hug:
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PrecariouslyPeculiar Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2018  New Deviant  Writer
Of course Huggle! Heart  
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MensjeDeZeemeermin Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2018
Listen also to pleasant sounds.  They are still there even when you are sad.
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Asahi-Taichou Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2018
Thanks. 
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