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Older version: Chakra -B.O.T. Page 2 by ARVEN92
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Oh my, wasn't that quick :D

First REDO version of pages 2 - 8, specifically, this is page 2 :)

I want to be quick with these, still I don't want to rush :3

Soooo, who will that odd wolf ever be? :O What? You already know? O.o
How's that even possible? xP

Ohwell, enjoy this! <3

And please If you post a critique, can you please also compare it to the old version? Chakra -B.O.T. Page 2 by ARVEN92 Thanks! <3

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:iconligarththedragon:
Critique by Ligarththedragon Dec 28, 2011, 5:18:14 AM
Well, wow. I can't believe the differences of these pages! This one looks much better, the trees look more realistic, the ground looks more 3D, and the lighting is kickass! I love the perspective in the last panel.
There's not much I can really point out now, it's just amazing.
I'd say the sky could do with some work, the bottom of the sky looks too dark, it should really be brighter because sun light reaches the lower part of the sky better. The grass doesn't really work too well, I like the way you drew it, I'd just say it's the shading, it doesn't blend in too well and looks off.
I'm really struggling to point out mistakes here :noes:
Well done 8D
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26 out of 28 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconunicorncat:
hi!
:squee:
Itīs great (like always), but i like the older version more.
the vision of led is better, and the trees are.. better, i canīt explain it, you know!

but donīt think itīs just bad.
what i like more than at the old page is the light-and-shadow-effect.
the difference comes out more here!

and the speech bubbles are cooler! love them now. the old were so little, i think.
the sky is cool here - but the old was good, too.


my final meaning:
the old version is a little better than this version.
but this is also not bad.


BYE
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:icongureokamifang:
GureOkamiFang Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Student Writer
....... do you know what my name means? Okami (obviously) means wolf but do you know what Gure means?
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Traditional Artist
That's how the word "grey" is spelled in Japanese?
Grey wolf?
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:icongureokamifang:
GureOkamiFang Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2018  Student Writer
yes! lol long story on how I got that name though but yes that's how you spell it in japanese
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:iconbladeninja76:
Bladeninja76 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice coloring on the nature.
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2018  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you!
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:iconkatekansketch:
KateKanSketch Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2017
just want to say basing this off okapi is epic my favourite video game <3 can't wait to read it all
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Ahh thank you!
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:iconphanatsu:
Phanatsu Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You improved so much omf
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
OMG thank you <3
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:iconacosplayta:
ACosplayTA Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   Digital Artist
:wow: how do u do these comics???? do u do them on computer or on paper???
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
It's done on paper ^^
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:iconacosplayta:
ACosplayTA Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013   Digital Artist
oh It looks like its done on computer ^^
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
XD Well the speech bubbles are done on computer actually :) But the drawings are hand-made :)
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:iconacosplayta:
ACosplayTA Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013   Digital Artist
oh cool :D
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
^^
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:iconclifhenger12:
clifhenger12 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
D: what dose B.O.T
stand for D: quick
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Battle Of The Titans :)
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:iconclifhenger12:
clifhenger12 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
:o
^^ kk thanks
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
np :)
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:iconclifhenger12:
clifhenger12 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
thanks
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
np :)
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:iconmeisterbat:
MeisterBat Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, I love the way you've improved this page! The character looks much older, and the trees aren't so flat compared to the older version!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh my oh my, thank you a lot for saying that! <3
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:icondiretylo:
DireTylo Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm very impressed! It's rare to see such a well-colored (and drawn) traditional comic, this is brilliant!~ ^^ I love the light and dark shading, it's all so seamless, and there's a big plus since it's inspired by Okami!
How long does it take you to do a page? ^^
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh my, thank you SO much for your compliments! <3
*and sorry for the late reply*

I'm so, so happy you like my comic! :D
Ah, it depends on how complex the page is, but generally, it takes some 10 hours, including sketch, lineart, colouring and lettering, and without counting pauses and breaks :D
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shadowraiwolf09 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student General Artist
This is related to okami from what the first page said, and that's why I'm gonna read this comic :)
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Aww awesome! thanks so much! <3
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:iconshadowraiwolf09:
shadowraiwolf09 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student General Artist
I read just about anything with dogs, and wolves, I love them =D
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Aww cool^^
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:icondragonheartluver:
DragonHeartLuver Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Student Artist
O WOW i love how you did the 3 bottom panels VERY TALENTED you are
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Awwww oh my, thank you SO much my dear! <3
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:icondragonheartluver:
DragonHeartLuver Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Student Artist
no problem doing something like that would take me hours if not days to do that kind of effect ^^
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Aww, thank you! :D
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:icondragonheartluver:
DragonHeartLuver Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Student Artist
no problem ^^
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
^^
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:iconnoobertk:
Noobertk Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012
WHAT IS GOING ON!? OKAMI + CHAKARA= CONFUSED ME
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
XD Beginnings
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:iconfreelikeabird:
FreeLikeABird Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What size of paper do you use for this? :la:
Awesome by the way! ^^ I really like the old one too ^^
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you so much! <3
Ah, I use regular A4 paper for my comic :D
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FreeLikeABird Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh okay ^^ That is awesome :la:
I have started to do a comic too, but I use A3 paper... ^^
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
8D
Oh that's cool! 8D
The only reason I don't use A3 is because it doesn't fit in my scanner XD But other than that, I love that format, it gives so much space to draw! <3
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FreeLikeABird Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah my scanner is to small... so I have to take a picture with my camera and then the quality isn't the best ^^
I wish I could use A4 but I think it is hard to draw so small ^^
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh I see XD Well when I scan in A3, I scan the picture in multiple parts then I mount them up in Paint (or better, Photoshop). That way the quality surely inscreases, no matter how small the scanner is :) But it does take long O: So I prefere A4, even if, as you say, there is less space for details xP
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FreeLikeABird Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah I've have done that one time... but I didn't mange it to look very well ^^
But A4 is a paper I often use except for my series xD
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh I see O:
I'm currently working on an A3 drawing, I really hope it turns out the way want ;;

Oh there, now I see :D
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caninefanatic Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Wow, although the old version was great, this looks amazing! The shading and lighting are much more realistic, and those trees look more like they do in the newer pages. The sunlight effect on the first two panels look really beautiful too! And Led looks really realistic, and in my opion, much cooler!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Awww, thank you so much my dear! 8D

I'm so so happy you like the newer version best! :D I think i really needed to redo it, since it was so old! XD
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:iconcaninefanatic:
caninefanatic Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
No problem :)
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
^^
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:iconcaninefanatic:
caninefanatic Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
my opion? "opinion" and seriously, this page is just stunningly beautiful and detailed "fav"
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