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Finally, another page :P

This part is going so slow! I really apologize for that.

Anyway, here is the encounter between Hielo & Flama and the rest of the "Heroes".

Flama starts telling her story...

Enjoy!

Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c) :iconarven92:

I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you! :)

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:iconnesariel:
Okay, let's start with the bad (to get it out of the way. The color work was, to me, a bit muddy. I found myself having to look two or three times at a couple of panels.

That being said, that was the only real problem I saw. Your line work is clean and clear, your sense of pacing is spot on, and the story you are telling is engaging. I'm not a fan of talking animal comics in general, and I want to read further.

The only possible advice I can give is to clean up the colors, or, more specifically, to possibly use more striking colors. All in all, I'd say keep doing what you are doing.
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:icon1knightstar1:
1Knightstar1 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD the one whose red and white reminds me of a Tigerclaw from Warriors.
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:iconlaqqingyourl0v3:
laqqingyourl0v3 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Professional Artist
SECOND PANEL



SERVAL BE LIKE "FUCK YOU"!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
LOL XD
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:icongrassy-aggron:
Grassy-Aggron Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
If there is one thing I'd like to mention, I realize this is a flashback, but making the "bad" wolf stand out with his/her very notable markings and color kind of came off as...cliche and predictable.  This seems to happen in a lot of stories, and just because they're evil, that doesn't mean they need to stand out in the flashback, since it makes it way too easy to see what's going on.  I think the facial expression itself should have been the give away that not all was swell in happyville, not the fact that they're so out of place with the others.


Other than that, looking forward to hearing more~
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
I see what you mean by that, I agree with you :) The evil guy does stand out way too much, I'm honestly regretting doing the scene that way :P
I'll keep that in mind for future pages! Thank you :D
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Grassy-Aggron Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No problem~
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
^^
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silver-moonwolf Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Student General Artist
Awww I love how they look like puppies in the last panel X3 <33
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Hoho Thank you^^
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:iconsilver-moonwolf:
silver-moonwolf Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Student General Artist
Your welcome ^u^
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
^^
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:iconsilver-moonwolf:
silver-moonwolf Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Student General Artist
:3
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:iconyokaiyukiko-chan:
YokaiYukiko-chan Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The brown-white wolf next to the angry-looking wolf in the last panel looks soooooooooo cute :3
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
XD Thank you^^
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:iconsaltysamsammich:
SaltySamSammich Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i'm at the end already...? O.O

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!Oh Noes! 
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Sorry :P
But it will continue soon!
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:iconthunderbird330:
Thunderbird330 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aha! A rebellion, eh?
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Yesss XD
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:iconglitch-wolf:
Glitch-wolf Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this page be like
wtf ooooo, whats gunna happen
Clem Epic face ooooooooooooo WHATS GUNNA HAPPEN
omgrandomemote WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
LOL XD
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:iconpamhenrichs:
PamHenrichs Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014
Flama... es... HERMOSAAAAAA!!!! :icongirl-loveplz:

Me da lastima ver a Hielo asi de lastimado... DX
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Jaja gracias^^

Si, verdad :(
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:iconsilverstream142:
silverstream142 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Simply an amazing comic.
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you^^
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:iconsilverstream142:
silverstream142 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your welcome!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
^^
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:iconsilverstream142:
silverstream142 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Red Link Luv 
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ChinchiLove Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This little wolf - puppy ( the third wolf, this with the gray fir ) IT'S SO ADORABLE♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♡♡♡♡♡♡ =^.^= ( sorry, Imma from the phone, if u see mistakes ^^' )
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Ohoho Thank you^^
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:iconchinchilove:
ChinchiLove Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oho no problemo, Arven ^^
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
^^
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:iconchinchilove:
ChinchiLove Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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:iconskywolf0524:
Skywolf0524 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Wow, this comic make me want playing okami again... (But my ps2 is old...)
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you^^
And same here :P
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:iconcameronpines:
CameronPines Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AWWW OMG THEY'RE SO FRIGIN CUTE WHOA
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
LOL Thank you^^
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:iconmaximwolf:
MaximWolf Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student General Artist
Uh oh
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
D8
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:iconkaantarell:
kaantarell Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aw! I just loves your comics so much! :dummy:
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you^^
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DarkStormSeeker Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You can tell about the grumpy face over there! :lol:

The messed fur over Hielo really gives a great effect of the injuries!! :3 Although it hurts looking at him on this page :/
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
XDD Yess!

Hoho, Thank you^^ Yeah, poor him D8
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:iconalyssawillome:
alyssawillome Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
As man I know what's coming to flama and it makes me sad.......

Helio should freeze him into a giant wolf ice sculpture >:D

REVENGE!!! Best served cold!!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Yeah, poor Flama :(

LOL though XD
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:iconalyssawillome:
alyssawillome Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
Yeah Hielo likes revenge cold >:D.
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
yesss XD
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:icondyatchy:
Dyatchy Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yay a other page!!!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
:D
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:iconrustyroxy:
Rustyroxy Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
I love these comics!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you^^
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