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LOLPAGE.

So, the majority of you who said the voice came from Orca, and the majority of you was right^^
It is indeed Orca and her brother, Wasgo, a newly introduced character :D

I know many of you have probably read their backstory on the Wiki, but I changed it a little bit, so it's not exactly as I had told it the first time :3

Anyway, here's the page! What exactly happened between C.Y. and Orca? O.O

We'll see!

Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c) :iconarven92:

I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you! :)

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ARTWORK: Great as always, the characters stand out of the backgrounds, strong expressions, good choice of line thickness.
Panel 1: You did a great job introducing a new character from paws to head, all in one panel! You also drew them recognizable enough to say who is who, yet you can still see they are siblings! I think Wasgo's tail is awesome, I really like how you add things like that into your drawings. Also, a very good background 0u0
Panel 2: The poses are just stunning *0* and their expressions really convey their emotions. Your action scenes are just breath-taking.
Panel 3: I like how you drew her bit into the hourglass, the close-up really adds on the excitment!
Panel 4: Her expression is just great! The way she looks, the lines surronding It adds a lot to the excitment of the reader.

COLORING/TONING:
I really like how you shadow your characters, And how you show they are in the woods by adding that light on them :) I would also like to mention that you are one of the rare people who I know that color their comics in full colour, It's amazing how you can do It!

COMPOSITION:
I like how you make the flashback panels thicker. Every panel to panel shows what is going on and never lets you confused, you give every scene the space It deserves.
It was great that in panel 1 you showed from head to toe to introduce a new character. It's also very good that you did the panels' shape so interesting, It adds to the excitment!

DIALOUGE: (don't know how to spell It 0///0)
It's good that you made It in first person, and that the person 'speaking' is C.Y. The words fit perfectly with the story and also with your drawings, your use of words help a lot.

And that's my feedback on your page, I really appreaciate If you read It all the way trough, sorry for my bad English ^^;
I would also like to use this chance to say that I really like your artwork and stories, and the feeling I get from reading and looking at them!
What do you think?
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:iconzorathetwilightdrake:
ZoraTheTwilightDrake Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I like how Orca has two different eye-colors:meow:
Those kinds of eyes are my favorite:D
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks!
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:iconzorathetwilightdrake:
ZoraTheTwilightDrake Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
You're welcome:)
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
^^
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:iconyama-no-mouken:
Yama-no-Mouken Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Orca always had different colored eye? And why does Wasgo have a....well, orca tail?
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Yes she has^^ Only, her pupils are very small, so it's not always detectable :P

Ah, for that, I got inspiration from the Wasgo, a mythological sea creature half wolf and half orca, that is often depicted with orca fins and tail :) I only gave him orca tail for simplicity XD
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:iconyama-no-mouken:
Yama-no-Mouken Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's an awesome idea!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
:D thank you^^
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:iconyama-no-mouken:
Yama-no-Mouken Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
^^
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:icondantedragon:
Dantedragon Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
huh, im actually surprised that its orca that was their first member recruited...
and so the chakra heroes started~~
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Yes she was :D
Hoho YAY! :D
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:icondantedragon:
Dantedragon Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hehe nice ^^
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
:D
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:iconcheetahsar:
cheetahsar Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh her brother is so fluffy! I love him! :D
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Aww thank you^^
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:iconcheetahsar:
cheetahsar Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :D
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
^^
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Grassy-Aggron Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wasgo has an actual orca tail... Ha ha ha, niiiice.


This is why you don't go putting things in your mouth, Orca.  You don't know where they have been.
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Hoho thank you^^
And LOL that's true though XD
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:iconneko-systeme:
neko-systeme Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014
Wow Wasgo et Orca se ressemble, mais grâce à ton talent pour faire des personnages différents, on voit tout de suite lequel est lequel. Bravo ! Ils n'ont pas le même visage ni la même musculature ...  Ce que je donnerais pour pouvoir faire ça xD
Quelque chose avec le sablier ... x)
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Wouas, merci pour avoir dit ça, je suis contente que tu les trouves pareils, mais différent en m^me temps ^^
Hoho oui! Le sablier a quelque chose à faire avec tout ça ;)
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:iconneko-systeme:
neko-systeme Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
De rien, tu as vraiment du talent pour ce genre de chose (:
*A* J'ai hâte de voir.
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Hoho encore merci! <3333
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:iconneko-systeme:
neko-systeme Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
De rien ^v^
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
:D
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:iconbanefulonaga:
BanefulOnaga Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Student General Artist
can i smack Orca?.. id smack her
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
LOL yes you can XD
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silver-moonwolf Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Lol I think either CYs necklace grew or Orca's head shrunk there from panel 2 to 3, but other than that, wonderful page! ^^ And oh, I was close XD When I first looked I was like "HEY, IT'S ORCA'S DADDY! 8D" And then read he is Wasgo and I completely forgot about the wiki lol But woo, awesome page 8D
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
LOL I agree, the hourglass proportions are screwed in this page XD

Ohoho no worries! But Thank you! <3
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:iconsilver-moonwolf:
silver-moonwolf Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Student General Artist
Haha X3 

And alright! ^.^ And your very welcome! <333
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
<3333
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:iconsilver-moonwolf:
silver-moonwolf Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Student General Artist
<333 :iconspazhugplz:
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:iconunicorncat:
UnicornCat Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing page, but something´s wrong about the third pannel.
i love the zooming, but the proportions aren´t right. the hourglass is too big for the mouth.
But everything else is great.
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
I agree, that hourglass is definitely too big XD thanks for pointing that out! ;)
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:iconcrazyivan69:
CrazyIvan69 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014
what a rude introduction :D
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
XD You can say that :'D
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:iconskyedeathwolf:
skyedeathwolf Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That made my day  Clap 
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:icondevilantrat:
DevilAntRat Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Professional Filmographer
wow wasgo is huge Led don't stand a chance! nyahahahahha tear the rainbow wolf apart  yeah
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
LOL yeah XD
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:iconwolfofficer:
wolfofficer Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OH  SNAP. This just Went into Sudden Death. Orca and Cy Just entered MORTAL KOMBAT www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gi7l41…
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
TEST YOUR MIGHT!
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:iconlew-leon-1:
lew-leon-1 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Composed and grumpy Orca being a troublesome youngster that jumps to others' throats? Wow, I didn't expect this :XD:
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Ohohoho no one did! XD
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:iconsaphelle:
Saphelle Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ti prego dimmi che nn è successo niente di male a Wago, LO ADOOOROO!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
XD Non preoccuparti, è vivo e vegeto XD
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:iconitrakat:
Itrakat Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Student General Artist
C.Y. saw into her soul/heart...?XD
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Not quite ;)
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RUNNINGWOLF-MIRARI Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Professional General Artist
Uh, che ganzo!!!:la:
Mi piace la vignettona con la clessidra in bocca:D
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Hoho grazie mille! <3
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