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Hoho, you WERE thinking that the flashback would be over, eh?
Well, it's only just beginning! The flashback will be quite long, almost 30 pages!
And this is the first. From now on, thicker panel lines will represent the flashback
So many surprises in this page! We finally get to see what Flama used to look like. Pretty, wasn't she?^^ She's like a red and female version of Hielo, in fact, she wasn't just his sister, she was his twin. So they used to look very similar
As for their design, I based myself off colourpoint/siamese cats, and a variant of the colourpoint is the rare red colourpoint, on which Flama is based
After telling about Flama, C.Y. proceeds to explain Kobu about her own past. And we are brought many, many, MANY pages back, right when we left in page 54, as C.Y. and Led are about to leave Urashima's shore.
Who are those two wolves in last panel? I'm pretty sure many of you remember them!
Do the names Shirotora and Near ring a bell?
Characters and art (c)
I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you!
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Overall, this is an amazing comic and I hope that it carries on with this quality!
Shiro!!! :-D Near!!! :-D
GASP. Flame has "reversed" fur like my fursona! :-D
Oh sweet 8D
What were your theories? I would love to read them, if you feel like sharing them! <3
ALORS, parlons un peu de Flama 8D
Pour tout dire franchement, on va commencer par les trucs pas cool, parce que les trucs bien réconfortent BREF :
Je trouve son nom pas très inspiré. C'est pas méchant hein, mais tu m'as vraiment habitué à mieux, donc je m'attendais à un nom moins explicite.
Mais sinon, Flama en elle même est juste... YIAAAAA Je peux pas la décrire ! J'ai hurlé derrière mon écran tellement elle est MIGNONNE ! On sent bien sa grâce naturelle, la douceur dans son regard, les couleurs, tout, je l'adore ! Vraiment !
Je vois ce que tu veux dire à propos de Flama XD Effectivement son nom est assez devinable XD
Hoho merci vraiment! Je suis heureuse que son design te plaise <3
Is it just me, or does the art style kind of change after the first panel? I'm not sure I like it, to be honest...Parts of panel two and three, and definitely the last panel, look a bit more...cartoony?
Also, reading the description...do you mean you modeled Flama after the flamepoint Siamese? I think that's what it's called...in the USA, at least.
Um, I actually don't know XD
I didn't really change my style that much between the panels XD It may be that I wasn't thinking and made the characters more cartoony XD That was unintentional though :'D
Ah, yes, the ginger version of the siamese XD I didn't know it was named Flamepoint, my bad^^
The line ‘especially the one who switch sides’ seems really unnatural to me. Kinda like on the previous page... but now that it’s repeated it really stands out. And for me it doesn’t really explain the reason behind his anger. Or rather... I don’t like the fact that you shove that info right into our face. I assume he doesn’t trust ‘those who switch sides’ because in the past he’s bean betrayed and all that, so I think the readers would be smart enough to deduce that from the story without it being exposed twice. Additionally this ‘doesn’t trust brings another question: Why? Sure, switching sides is bad, but why does he react so aggressively to it?
So I think the dialogue would have more natural flow if you put that info after the flashback. To maybe summarize Hielo’s story.
I should definitely remove it from this page and put it afterwards, when his flashback comes in
Thank you a lot for pointing that out! <3
Hoho j'espère qu'il va etre intéressant! <3
Ah yes, actually all mammals can have twins
Twins happen when a zygote splits in two embryos after being fecundated by two different sperm cells.
I think it's especially common in animals who have many cubs in each litter, like cats, dogs, wolves and others
I'm happy you like this idea as well From now on, thick-lined panels indicate flashback^^