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Hey look, Kobura is smiling to an enemy! Aaaaaaand she's gone.
Hoho, it took me quite some time to draw panel 4, but I kind of like it :)
And I think Ajna is trying to overcome C.Y., oh no! D8

Do you like what I've done to the panels to make it look like C.Y. is changing voice? :) I hope the sudden different font and the coloured panels don't clash too much^^; I think they work pretty ok :)

So, what is going to happen now? D8

Will C.Y. actually let Ajna out? D8

Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c) :iconarven92:

I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you! :)

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This was very beautiful, no doubt. I love Chakra, but always hope you post the next page eary. However, I did see some errors in this. In the fifth panel, Jackal's leg seem to be far apart and unusually bent. Apart from that, I loved the whole thing.
The colors were a bit dull, yet it showed lots of background and theme to the scene. The loved the expressions, it showed a lot in the characters moods, and the font changes to show Ajna talking.
The originality, well, it is really common to have one of the main characters tackle the bad guy, then the leader stopping him/her before they can rip its throat out. It could have been more original, but I thought it was awesome :3
This page was awesome, overall.
Keep up the GREAT work!
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I really enjoy this piece, mainly because of the way that you textured everything. I think that the way that the teeth are drawn could possibly be fixed a bit though, in the 6th box, because his teeth look to be bending in strange postions, which I've never seen in a dog. I think that the monkey was drawn beautifully. In box 5, there's something weird with the dog's face, it looks to have been shrunken or the neck looks a bit small. Also, it is very hard to read the writing, so maybe making that bigger would be a good idea. I also don't necessarily like the color schene, it's really dull. I would prefer slightly brighter colors, but it's a nice piece! Hoping that you come out with your next one soon, because most people don't like to wait a while for the next one when they're interested!
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Sanluris Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist Photographer
I guess her powers were ok. Here we go....
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ScatteredHope Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2015  Student Digital Artist
YAY
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
:la:
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:iconbooglybear:
booglybear Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014   Traditional Artist
Uh oh. 
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
D8
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:iconbooglybear:
booglybear Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014   Traditional Artist
That growl looks scary!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
True! D8
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:iconbooglybear:
booglybear Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014   Traditional Artist
Better foe than friends I say!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Yeah :'D
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:iconbooglybear:
booglybear Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014   Traditional Artist
Yep:D
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PrismaShadow Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
Poor Kobura... :(
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PrismaShadow Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
:'(
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Yeah :(
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AshleyChansie Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:iconishipitplz:
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:iconprismashadow:
PrismaShadow Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
OMG I remember this scene in "Thor": ANOTHER!!!! :XD: You just made my day :D
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AshleyChansie Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Lel, ok.
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
LOL XD
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AshleyChansie Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yea xD
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
:D
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lew-leon-1 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can imagine C.Y. voice getting all strange, she must be pretty terrifying at that moment :XD:
So much happens on those pannels, it's amazing!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
I bet the same XD
Aww thank you^^
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:iconandra31:
Andra31 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
hello, how you used pencil couleures?
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Coucou^^
Oui, j'ai utilisé des crayons de couleurs :D
J'ai travaillé en créant des strates, une strate pour chaque nuance que j'utilise :)
Par example, pour colorier le gris de C.Y., j'ai utilisé trois crayons de trois gris différents :)
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Andra31 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
a good ... it seems not ... but what brand of pencils or you have purchased and at what price?
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you^^
The brand is called "Caran d'Ache Supracolour Soft", I have purchased a box that contains 120 pencils, and it costs around 200 euros :)
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Andra31 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
thank you and you take esque courtyard design?
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Uhm, what is esque courtyard design? :)
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ValaSedai Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh my, thank you SO much for that! I am honoured! <3
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Paperchild01 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I have theory that C.Y. can talk to Ajna and that they are like sisters. I also imagine how Ajna looks in her "ghost" form. 
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
That's interesting :D
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eembuc1000 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
NO KOBURA!!! YOU POOR BABY!!! I almost started crying for the poor guy. :(
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Yeah, poor him ;;
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Dragondog2233 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OH YEAH GREAT WORK C.Y
YOU TOTALLY STOPPED THAT FROM HAPPENING 
And poor Zec! He was so close too!
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
OHOHO XD
Oh? Zec? O:
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Dragondog2233 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
dAMMit i alWAYs CalL KobURA ZeC
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Earthpatriot117 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
RABID WOLF ALERT! RABID WOLF ALERT! RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!!!
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
D8
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Earthpatriot117 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013
no but honestly, she looks scary. O_O.....
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Yeah O.O
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Earthpatriot117 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
the look on the green pups face in the third panel very nearly broke my heart. v_v
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Aww oh my O:
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Earthpatriot117 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
........you know the look on C.Y's face seems like she saying 'I'm gonna eat you alive'
lol ^_^'
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Hehe, perhaps that's what she's thinking XD
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SSSWarriorcats101 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
YEA C.Y TAKE OUT THE MONKY! >8D
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
YUSS XD
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Karmakat01 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oi ... c'est vraiment la MERDE qui arrive la ...
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Oui D8
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neko-systeme Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
Haha Kobura's love is just so funny x'D
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Hoho thank you^^
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