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DAT PAGE.

We hit 103 guys :D
And I just finished another sheet of storyboards. This is the second one I complete. Each sheet contains 6 storyboarded pages. SOOOO yeah :D

And with this page we bet to meet three new Demons:

Diviak the Boar, Zec the Rabbit, and Tiikeri the Tiger.
We had already met Kobura some pages ago, and now we see him in action :3

Chasing scene is finally coming to an end, YAY! And it looks like the Demons just can't stop Orca :P

But... is that the hint of a smile on Kobura's face in last panel?
Hmm, something tells me it's not over yet D8

Enjoy!

Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c) :iconarven92:

I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall coposition. Thank you! :)

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Vision:
The vision of this page was pretty awesome. :D I really liked it when Tiikeri and Kobura were getting each other pumped up. The intense background looked like it would take a lot of time, and you pulled it off very nicely. I also would like to add that when it comes to Tiikeri's markings, you did a good job locating them where they were supposed to go! However, when Orca was leaping across the gorge, her body was just a little off proportion. I know that it's the perspective that makes her l;ook like that, but the back legs and feet could have been just a smidget bigger and thicker. I saw no other mishaps in this page ;)

Originality:
Yet again, I would give this page a 5 stars for originality. The characters' actions, thoughts, and plans were all skillfully suited to the story. I really didn't expect a gorge to be at the end of the cave! Great job on the originality of this page!

Technique:
I really like your beautiful technique! I love the way you draw the mouths when they're open; The anatomy looks perfect in every way! Even the teeth look nicely fit! I also like Zec's rabbit pelt, and the way the pelt's eyes look like his eyes. The only thing I am bothered by is the way you sometimes draw the chest fur. Bot Kobura's and Tiikeri's chest fur looks almost clumped together, like little balls of fur. Overall, the technique was really, really spectacular! I can most definitely learn to draw mouths right from this page! :D

Impact:
The impact of the page was really good! Orca's daring leap across the gorge really spoke to me in a way that it said, "Don't be shy to do daring things." Being a shy person in real life, I am known to stick to routes, tricks, and even food brands that I am familiar with. The page taught me to try new things.

Overall Score:
I would give the overall score of this page a 4.5 or a 5! It is absolutely wonderful and I love the smoothness of the colors. The effects are cool, the story original, and the visuals easy to 'process'. :D Good job!
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This is a really neat ongoing comic, and yes, like everyone else, i gotta buy the book. The artwork is just stunning, and the characters are so easy to follow. I enjoy just looking at this piece of art! The faces, the claws, the paws, all just so perfect!! I have seen some really good strips on deviantART, but this one just tops them all!! You have even gone so far as to get the shading and colors all right!! I think that most of us would have just given up, because I know how long these take to draw!
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LeopardPaws01 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
why am I so happy that there are so many polish/czech/slovak  names? 
Diviak matches so perfectly lol.
Diviak=wild boar
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ThatRandomeTomboy Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Why didn’t he just go above them and away from the gorge
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ShadowLeafRiver Featured By Owner May 6, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You've used like all the languages here! A finnish word for tiger is tiikeri!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 19, 2018  Professional Traditional Artist
That's correct XD
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ImagineCorgis Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Im a bit late to the party, just started reading this comic but it's never too late I guess! c,:
Anyways, may I ask after what language did you name Zec?
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Ahh it's okay :)
Zec is Serbian for "Rabbbit" :)
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:iconaliaumba:
AliaUmba Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Same word in croatian. You're really good at names!
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:iconvitani00:
Vitani00 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
waitta minute! are you from Finland????????????????? the tigers name is Tiikeri what means tiger in finland :o
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
I'm not, but I did give Tiikeri a Finnish name :)
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:iconvitani00:
Vitani00 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh okay it's so cool
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:iconmogmo:
Mogmo Featured By Owner May 21, 2016  Student General Artist
Zec looks like a Rabbit/Wolf amalgam :p
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 25, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
*exactly XD
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 25, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
That's axactly what she is^^
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:iconkukkupeppu:
Kukkupeppu Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Tiikeri.. Finnish name..

SUOMI MAINITTU, TORILLA TAVATAAN! HAHAHAHAH.

Greetings from Finland.
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Ohoho hi! XDD
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:iconfallustoro:
Fallustoro Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Student General Artist
Tiikeri the tiger :'D perfect!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
:la:
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:iconprismashadow:
PrismaShadow Featured By Owner Edited Aug 3, 2014
Orca be like: DEAL WITH IT BOYZ (and girl :P)!!!!! 8-)
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PrismaShadow Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
;P
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
hohoho XD
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MintyZedGrimes Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Uh,Zodiacs?I think you missed. xD
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Ohoho we'll see about that ;)
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greenytijana Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Is Zec the one with the rabbit on his head?
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Yes, she is^^
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greenytijana Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's awesome :D
Oh, it's a she.. My bad. xD
I love how you made the names from different languages. Zec caught my eye first tho, because I'm from Serbia like her.  x3
Also, doesn't Koza mean goat and not sheep? o-o
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Hoho that is cool XD That's right, I named every character after a language^^
And that's right, Koza means goat :)
Kozel is actually somewhere between a sheep, a goat and a wolf. She looks like a sheep because of the wool, like a goat because of the horns, and like a wolf because of her overall anatomy XD
Moreover, she is a girl, but actually has a boy's name, as "Kozel" literally means "male goat" XD
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greenytijana Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hah, that's pretty tricky. :D
Here, 'jarac' means male goat :)
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Ohhh I see that sounds great! :D
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greenytijana Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
XD
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WandaTheDragon Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
Tiikeri? Finnish name? Did you know that tiikeri means Tiger in english?
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Ah, yes, I did know^^
Each Demon has a name from a different language, and for Tiikeri, I chose Finnish :D
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:iconwandathedragon:
WandaTheDragon Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
Awesome :D
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
XD
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SaxonVoter Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Student
Tiikeri?! A Finnish name? Yay!!! ^___^
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Yesss! I love Finnish names! :la:
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HopeCvon Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013   General Artist
Oh OK. The rabbits a mask
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Yes, she wears rabbit fur :)
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MitsuVampireWolf Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I am wondering ..Tiikeri? Im from Finland and that is My language :P Tiikeri is finnish and meens Tiger :o heheeh
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Hehe, that's right! :) I chose a Finnish name for my characters^^ Many of my characters have names from different languages^^
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MitsuVampireWolf Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thats cool X3
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
:D
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FlamewolfTheWhite Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Tiikeri? Finnish name hell yeah! I mean I'm Finn :meow:
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Yesss! :la: I love the name Tiikeri, and I love Finnish! :la:
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FlamewolfTheWhite Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
=D
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
^^
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ktpdragon Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
Well, that plan backfired.

I love this comic! New favorite web comic. Definitely.
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh whoa, thank you so much for that! <33
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ktpdragon Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
You're welcome!
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
^^
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