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AFRICAAAAA!

Chui, don't even complain right now. You asked for it.

Hmm, I don't like this page very much. For some reason, I think the last panel is not as "powerful" as I wanted it to be. Perhaps I should have dropped the background, it takes away from the action :P

Oh well.

The bullet has been shot. Now, what's going to happen? D8

Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c) :iconarven92:

I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you! :)

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First let me start with the fact that this comic is one of the best I've seen on this site. Your colors and technicque is indeed original and beautiful . You do what many people including myself can see this better in DIGITAL version . About the feel .. you've never got us down here , I think i talk for everyone when i say we all can't wait for the next page to be posted

About this page i would say only that the second panel and the last aren't very clear , if I was you I've only put Africa in the second panel running to Chui , without that draw where Africa is lifting her paw . But in rest everything look AWESOME !!! Keep the GOOD job up !!!

And sorry for my english ^^''
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oh i can critic here now haha

i felt like Africa did not need to say Chui's name in the first panel. or that she could have just shouted his name and went straight "to leave him alone"

panelling and choice of shots could have been better, tho that's based on your style, i feel like the 3rd panel is a little unnecessary, since number 1 hooks up very well with the last panel.
the page might have a more dynamic feel if panel 3 was not there.
you have to note the pacing of each situation in the story but that depends as its is usually down to comic story telling style you choose to use.
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:iconbatkittyplaysaj:
BatkittyPlaysAJ Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I am a dummy! 
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:iconspamer921:
spamer921 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2017
his hane was chui?
oh boy that name is good contrast with the threat that seemed
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh cool XD
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:icongeneralscourage:
GeneralScourage Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2017
SHOTS FIRED--
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:iconsanluris:
Sanluris Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
That lucky leopard. The tracking collar makes it harder to bite his neck.
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:iconcheapyy:
Cheapyy Featured By Owner May 1, 2016  Student
amazing work. i'm more and more impressed with each page :) 
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 2, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Aww thanks a lot :)
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:iconcheapyy:
Cheapyy Featured By Owner May 4, 2016  Student
you're welcome :)
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
^^
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:iconmy-lullaby123:
my-lullaby123 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015  Student Artist
HOW DO YOU DO THIS AMAZING WORK? With what looks like just pencils? Do you have a tutorial?
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
I do indeed only use pencils :D
The one tutorial I have is a little outdated sadly, my technique has changed a bit since then: Traditional Colouring Tutorial by ARVEN92
Gosh I need to make a new one XD
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:iconmy-lullaby123:
my-lullaby123 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2015  Student Artist
Thank you!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
No problem!
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:iconalbreech:
albreech Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome! The style is great
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you^^
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:iconalbreech:
albreech Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ma'pleasure ^L_^
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
^^
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:iconphilliwolf5:
Philliwolf5 Featured By Owner May 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
What a good mom!!  Go Afrika!!!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Gooooo! :la:
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:iconerichan8dd:
Erichan8DD Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing action scene! ^^
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconfireeyedwolf:
FireEyedWolf Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2015
I love the faded out Africa in the third panel it sows how fast she going how did you do that is fabulous 
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you! ^^
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:iconfireeyedwolf:
FireEyedWolf Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015
Your welcome and I just realised my stupid spelling 
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
LOL it's ok^^
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:iconbrandi3981:
brandi3981 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
th mosi looks so tiny & his face says whoa i better start listening to mama

I'm thinking watching her beat on chui...
A good job Africa
B i know what power a domestic cat can get behind those smacks that would REALLY smart with her weight behind it & what 2 inch claws :icondxplz:
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
LOL so true XD

And we'll see XD And you're right, a raging leopard must be an intimidating sight O_O
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:iconbrandi3981:
brandi3981 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod: but you know kids I'm sure they might thing something like that for a minute or even a day but it's in their nature to get into trouble :3
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
That's true XD
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:icondemonicalex:
DemonicAlex Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LEAVE MOSI ALONE! YOU BATURDZ 
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
LOL
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:icontici9090:
TICI9090 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If the collar wasn't there, Africa could've killed Chui within minutes. I mean, look how fatal that bite to the neck could have been :O
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
True that O:
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:iconnurrdy:
Nurrdy Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Loving this story! <3333
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you^^
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:icondesert2in1:
desert2in1 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
At first I didn't see the words on the third panel and I was like 'Alone?' :-? (Confused)  
I'm blind XD
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
XD Sorry for that XD I think I'll make them more evident :)
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:icondesert2in1:
desert2in1 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No it's not your fault XD
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
:)
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:icondesert2in1:
desert2in1 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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:iconimaginecorgis:
ImagineCorgis Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wooo! It's been a long time since I was this excited for a comic! 
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Hoho Thank you :)
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:iconshinranranger:
ShinranRanger Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015
oh Chui u messed with the wrong mama
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Yeah XD
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:iconshinranranger:
ShinranRanger Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015
Roar!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
XD
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:iconshinranranger:
ShinranRanger Featured By Owner May 2, 2015
C:
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:iconcloudwilk:
Cloudwilk Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Professional Filmographer
Caught up on the next few sections... love your character development ^^
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Hoho Thank you^^
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:iconkizyoi:
Kizyoi Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Woot!!!!!
GO MOMMA AFRICA!!  Kick his butt to the next millennia!  :D
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