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Oil pastel 3 - Oliver's bed by artisticTaurean Oil pastel 3 - Oliver's bed by artisticTaurean
*Because these drawings are on 18"x24" paper, these are pictures of them taken on my camera.*

DO NOT LIKE.

This one bothers me so much, and I think I might take to it again tomorrow to adjust it. My dog Oliver's bed, with a pink (but not that pink, I swear--it's what I had to work with!) towel draped over it. I think there's not enough definition... it needs more darks. The light source was in front of the bed, though, so there weren't too many shadows and I drew what I saw. *shrugs*

Art © me!

EDIT: Showed it to my professor, and she said I was having trouble with the angle. She could tell I was looking down at the bed, but what I was looking at and what I SAW were conflicting. (She also gave me a nudge in the direction of another class, saying that she didn't really emphasize angle in this class, but Intermediate Drawing does address it.)

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Submitted on
December 15, 2009
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Resolution
900×675
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Camera Data

Make
PENTAX Corporation
Model
PENTAX Optio M50
Shutter Speed
1/50 second
Aperture
F/3.5
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Dec 15, 2009, 9:51:34 PM
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