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New Manga Characters by ArtisticJessy New Manga Characters by ArtisticJessy
I canceled "Project Online"
Now I am starting an other one, but I don't have a name yet.
The male is Lucifer, but I have no name for the girl

I will soon start drawing the pages

Enjoy~
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moonylady Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
First of all, hello there, how are you? 
I'm moonylady, one of the :icondartschool: tutors, and came here for a critique in your piece, as asked.
Gettin down to business, I really like how you managed the grayscale, it looks gorgeous, it's all grey but still, it looks like a finished piece of art.
Now let's get down into parts:
1 - I know scanners can really ruin pieces, but after scanning you can tweak the colors in image editors (photoshop, sai, etc.) so they look better, these gray stains in the background kinda distract the attention of the main focus, which are your characters (I think brightness and contrast can do the job, in last case you can contour the characters with the selection tool and throw in some white in the background);
2 - Now are some personal preferences: I would try to put his hand on her shoulder, this would give them some approach (?), also I would make his wings bigger to give it more drama, that's pretty much it, hope it helps you in anyway, feel free to message me if you have any doubts or don't agree with this. :)
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ArtisticJessy Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
To your first point, I edited it on my phone cause I didn't had a chance to scan it ^^

To the second one, I just put the hand there after I was already done with the picture (but the hand seems too short) , and thanks for the wing advise, I will do that next time ^^
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Alylay Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014
awesome
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duskierel Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Ah, isn't Lucifer another name for the devil? OwO
:heart: these guys look so cool!! ( and no more Project Online... :C )
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ArtisticJessy Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Yes it is ^^ but I'll think about what he is exacly, cause otherwise it could get too close to kuroshitsuji
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kjab2000 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Student
Cool!
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5tar-Dust Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing!
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