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Artist // Hobbyist // Digital Art
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  • Deviant for 12 years
  • She / Her

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Alright, before I start I want to ask that you do not get offended by this. You asked for a critique, so there will be things in this that you don't like. Critiques are made to help you grow as an artist, so these are just some things I see from my point of view as a fellow artist.
First thing I see is that the snouts are a bit large, mainly Luna's. In cat anatomy, muzzles are generally small, same with their heads. Emma's head is really large as well. Her muzzle should be brought closer in, as with her cheeks and ears. Luna's neck is also very thin. Next time, try making it thicker, maybe studying a cat while in the process.
Hmm what else..the eyes are too far away and too far down. I've read previous critiques where you've said that's just you're style, but it's incorrect anatomy. Look at this picture: img06.deviantart.net/7cd0/i/20… This picture really ties in the whole basis of my critique lol. Notice how the eyes are higher up on the face, and how it's head and muzzle is quite small. Study this image for awhile, then compare it to yours.
Sometimes, it helps if you find a photograph of a cat and sketch over it to get a feel for it's anatomy. There's also hundreds of drawings of cat's skeletal anatomy which also helps some people.

That's all I saw anatomy wise, I also think you shouldn't write their names on the image. It looks awkward and out of place.
And that's it! I suggest you study cat anatomy for awhile, just to get a feel of realistic anatomy.
I hope you didn't get too offended by this, as I'm only trying to help you. If you did get offended, I suggest you not ask for critiques anymore, since you won't always get the answers you want.
Overall, I think this is a lovely piece that really show's how hard you worked on it. I adore Emma's design and I think you're overall very talented. Keep up the good work!
Hello Luna, dear...
I think I bought her for $15?? ;; v ;;
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Thank you!! Sending him over now ♥♥

And not that I can think of, that's just the biggest one! thank you so much, i'm super excited to see what you do with him!! ♥♥
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If you're still interested, I'll accept your offer!
You can send the money to savannahhhuff2@gmail.com and the core to xioras !

Again, I just ask that he comes back to me if you are no longer interested in him!!
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