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Moral: Respect Other People/ Be Kind
Protagonist: Tiger (Travis)
Antagonist: Lion ( Leo )
Climax: bully
Setting: jungle

1. Intro world
2. comp. - Race (w obs.)
3. Fail comp (who’s King) Lion Cheats - trap wrong way sign
4. intro turtle
5. cross threshold - wise turtle coaches in the ways
6. new race
7. bully* Trap! (wrong Way) / hole? lion caught in hole
8. Wins Comp. - (beating at the lions own game, and out smarting)
9.  Lion Hurt / goes back to help
10. moral -
11. Both win
12. return*


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1. In a Jungle that thrives underneath the sun, lives a feud that has just begun. Leo the lion and Travis the Tiger compete to be the leader of the glorious empire.

*2. Tall green trees and furry little friends all make a home where two need to make a mends. They battle for ownership of this luscious environment. And aspire to be the one the critters call king of it.

3. Today is a very special day for Leo and Travis. They are going head to head in a foot race forking in the jungle. Travis is a very nervous for the race while Leo looks suspiciously confident.

4. They go to the start line and a rabbit referee says, “ready, set, go!” as soon as they hear this, they speed off!

5. Leo is up to his devious tricks again! Leo and Travis running side by side. Leo, running all the way ahead, flips a sign making travis go the wrong way instead.

6.  Travis went the wrong way and into a dead end.

7. A couple seconds later the crowd was cheering “king Leo, King Leo!” He was upset that he fell for the lions trap. Travis wondered further into the woods to look for help back to the race.

8. Travis sees a turtle in the distance. He walks over to the  elderly turtle, who asked travis if he was lost.

9. The wise turtle trained Travis everyday, preparing him for the big race against that Leo the Lion. The wise turtle knew that leo was a cheater. The wise turtle trained Travis the tiger moves like how to go around or jump over the hole.

10. Another important thing that the wise turtle taught Travis was that respect is the key to winning. The turtle taught travis to respect everyone. He had a lot of confidence that travis was going to win the race but he wanted Travis to be respectful after the win. They trained for many days and nights.

11. After travis finished his training with The Wise Turtle, he challenged Leo to another race. Leo accepts the challenge.

12. While standing at the starting line, Leo starts to make fun of Travis because he lost the first race, but Travis knows that Leo only won because he cheated and he will cheat again. So he prepared himself for the sign change.

13.  Then Leo says “you are not good enough to win against me,why are you even trying. Have you not learned your lesson the first time?”

14.  However, through all of the bullying, Travis thought to himself about what the turtle told him to “always be respectful of others”.

15. The race begins and the lion pulls ahead quickly

16. Leo tries to trick Travis again with the wrong way sign. But he didn’t fall for it.

17. Travis is being very careful because he has a bad feeling that leo will set up more traps.

18. Then he saw a huge hole and just knew that it was another one of leo’s traps. When he got to the huge hole he jumped right over it. He was so happy because he was almost to the finish line.

19. Leo goes the wrong way and falls into his own hole.

20. Travis was just about to win the race but he returns to help Leo and they finish together.

21. As they both reach the finish line, with excitement and pride. Leo now realizes that cheating isn’t right, and that he shouldn’t cheat again for the rest of his life.

22. Both Leo and Travis return to where they live. Soon after, Travis and Leo become friends and they live happily ever after.

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jtheiss Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017
15) The race starts and the loin pulls ahead quickly! He flies by to the sign to flip it around. Leo gets there just in time before travis. But travis... (next Page)
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wes-ley Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017
leo forgets and falls into his own hole
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DaveyA001 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017
21]   As they both reach the finish line, both happy and proud. Leo now realizes that cheating is bad, and that he should not cheat again for the rest of his life.
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DaveyA001 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017
20]    Travis was at the finish line, but he turns around to help Leo to finish together. 
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arudiger002 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017
3-Today is a very special day for Leo and Travis. They are going head to head in a race for ownership of the jungle. The race starts at noon and Travis is super excited but also really nervous. Leo on the other hand is really confident and he is not even a tiny bit nervous. 
17-Leo starts to slow down because he does not think that was the only trap so he starts looking around. He is being very careful about any signs or anything that could trip him.
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mbartlett001 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017
22. Leo and Travis continue on with their lives, as Travis the Tiger becomes king of the Jungle for the very first time. Leo the Lion goes on to conquer other areas, but the lost to Travis the Lion he'll remember for a lifetime.

14. However, through all the bullying, Travis recalled what the wise turtle once said. He once told him, "Always be respectful to others no matter how unfair they can be."  
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DarrelNeselrod Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017

Rewrite of 9: The nice old wise turtle trained Travis everyday, preparing him him for the big race against King Leo, the lion. The old wise turtle knew that King Leo was a cheater, so he trained Travis how to avoid the hole.


Rewrite of 12: While Travis and Leo are standing at the starting line, Leo starts to make fun of Travis because he lost their first race, but Travis knows that Leo only won because he’s a big cheater and a cheater is bound to cheat again. So, he prepares himself for the upcoming sign change.

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jcrabtree001 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017
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Travis runs far down a old path overgrown with trees. Eventually he finds himself at a dead end. Confused, he takes a loss and goes back the way he came.
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alannaredding Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017
1&2

In a jungle that thrives underneath the sun, 

lives a feud that has just begun. 

Leo the Lion and Travis the tiger 

compete to be the leader of the glorious empire.


Although Leo was rude and cruel,

Travis stayed true to his moral rule.

Respect others and always be kind;

and if you follow those rules, you’ll never fall behind


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Cskwirut Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017
8- Travis sees a wandering turtle in the distance. The turtle walks over to travis and asks if he is lost.
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jbaldwin001 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017
4.  They move up to the start line and the rabbit referee says, “ready, set, go!” , which sends leo and travis off speeding throughout the jungle.

11.
 Travis finished his training with The Wise Turtle, and was ready to rematch Leo. He challenged Leo to another race, and Leo accepts. 
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Reshiemuse Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017
10. Another important thing that the wise turtle taught Travis was respect is the key to winning, and to make sure that he respected everyone. He had a lot of confidence that travis was going to win the race but he wanted Travis to still be respectful after the win. They trained for many days and nights. 
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13.) Leo says “you can't win against me, did you not learn your lesson the first time?”
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