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Dots, stripes and glasses

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and freaky me of course

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Image size
533x800px 407.07 KB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D700
Shutter Speed
1/320 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Nov 27, 2009, 9:24:22 PM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

First off all let me start off by saying it looks quite original.

Now this is were I tell you the thinks that I think that could be slightly better.

I don't like how it's lighted, it's a bit too harsh.
The bra looks a bit dirty on the right breast.
The same goes for your right shoulder
as well as for the bottom left corner
The blush on your cheeks is also a bit harsh.
You also look really pale in this shot.
Also are you putting your chest forward or are you holding your shoulders back? It looks a bit like that's the case and it's a bit weird.

That's a lot of criticism I guess, however I really like the contrast between the glasses, the bra and the black dotted background. And that's what makes this shot appealing. The rest is just details, and that's what my critique's mostly on.

Is it correct to say that you actually didn't photoshop it at all?

On a side-note: you are far from freaky <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink) - ;)"/>. Keep up the good work